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Review #1, by whitelillies Two: The First Mistake

7th April 2017:
Hi!

I thought I'd leave a review since you had so few of them (and this story is great).

I like the plot so far, and I'm excited to see where it goes! Stuff is about to go down. I also really like that you've included Barnabus in this story! Will Aislin perhaps make an appearance as well? That would be gold.

Also, I think your writing is fantastic! You write really good dialogue and set the scene quite well. Your characters are also quite unique, though I can see some resemblances between all of your main ones.

I'm really digging Scorcha! Scorpius seems like quite the character haha. He reminds me of Oscar Wilde or some other dandy type person. Either way, I want to know more! About everyone and how they all fit into the narrative.

Hopefully you can update soon (now that Shadowplay is completed!)

Sofia xxx

Author's Response: Yaay, thank you for reviewing!

I couldn't resist throwing Barnabus in there. It's like I'm Dr. Frankenstein and I've created this monster that I'm so fascinated with.

Having so much fun with Scorpius' character -- struggling not to indulge so much that he's completely ridiculous. We'll see, we'll see.


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Review #2, by blackzero Two: The First Mistake

7th April 2017:
OMG that was unexpected .update soon

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to update soon :)

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Review #3, by blackzero One: Sorcha

7th April 2017:
Good first chapter.saying Sorcha is a bit mouthfull...but the character sketch sounds interesting

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Sorcha is an Irish name and can be pronounced a couple different ways, but my favorite is: The "sor" is pronounced as in "soar," and the "cha" sounds like a "sha."


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