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Review #1, by Peeves Something

15th October 2015:
Awrite!
Hou ar ye? Peeves here, spreading Halloween cheer.

You know, you could focus on the pranks instead of all this soppy romance... would be much more interesting for me.

Of course I'm also happy to read about my favourite pranksters after school, especially seeing them alive and happy. I know that it doesn't stay that way... and soon they are replaced by the Weasley twins ;)

It's good to see James and Lily together. That boy went through more trouble than she is worth for her. I wouldn't be surprised if he carried her through hell and back if she asked it of him.
Beautiful dialogue and nice description in here, your writing is really good. I may have to come back for something else soon.


I'm off now, being sneaky somewhere else.
lots to do - Halloween is near.

Author's Response: Awww thank you Peeves!! I know, more soppy stuff than pranks but that was what the song was like! I do enjoy the Marauders in their prankster mode too. And James really does love Lily!!!

And thank you, I sometimes struggle with descriptions so I'm very happy you liked it here!!

Happy Halloween ;)


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Review #2, by BellaLestrange87 Something

3rd October 2015:
Hi, it's me. I'm assuming this is the fluffy Jily one-shot you were referring to.

I love the description of the cannonball competition the Marauders are having, as well as the bantering between them.

Lily wondering how she could ever have hated James made me smile. I guess now that he's matured he's completely different from how he was before.

I love how cute and couple-y they are. You can tell they love each other (even if Lily only admitted it out loud just then) and it makes me very happy.

This was a really cute one-shot! I need to read some more of your work; I don't know how I haven't yet.

~Olivia

Author's Response: I should've posted the link really... sorry! I'm so happy you liked though.

I love writing those moments when they're just being teenagers and messing about having a laugh. Even though James has grown up. I also love writing them as a couple, so fun and they're so adorable!

Thank you so so much for your lovely review. :)

Sophie xxx


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Review #3, by LivingFairytale Something

25th August 2015:
Oh my goodness, this just made me melt like a pat of butter. James and Lily are so adorable together. I think you have a beautiful, detailed manner of writing which really pulls the reader in. You also did very well with the characterization of the other Marauders. Well done! :)

x LivingFairytale

Author's Response: Thank you so much. What a lovely review!!

I love James and Lily, and wanted to do some lovely Jily fluff!! :p

I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and thanks so much again for reviewing! Xxx


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