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Review #1, by beyourbest Finally Happy

12th October 2014:
Fascinating! I really like this story because it explores how a sweet and caring, if prejudiced, young girl became one of the cruelest, craziest, and most loyal Death Eaters. Please continue writing this story. I don't mind cliffhangers, but I do mind waiting all year to find out what happened.

Author's Response: I finished writing Dark Heart and the rest of it should be up soon, it is continued in a sequel. Thanks for reading.

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Review #2, by Pixileanin For Real

9th September 2014:
Hey, I came by to see what happens next in your story. Bellatrix sounds very excited about things. I imagine that soon, she will see things that are dark and ugly.

You might want to re-read your first chapter. It has a lot of repeated paragraphs, like you pasted your story in twice.

Happy writing!

Author's Response: Are you a Legilimens? That's exactly what happened! I just fixed it, but as I am not a trusted author, so it needs to be validated. I noticed that the first day, but didn't know how to fix it. Are you going to keep reading it? Tell me how you like it, and I'll tell you how I like yours!

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