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Review #1, by UnluckyStar57 Seven Years of Lily Evans

12th July 2014:
Hahaha, wow. This is really cute, but it also analyzes Lily and Snape's deteriorating relationship over the years.

I like how people kept telling her that he was dangerous, and as time passed, her defense of him became weaker as he did things that were worse and worse. The fact that you accomplished all of this characterization in 150 words per year at Hogwarts is pretty incredible. :)

You are really good at dialogue. Dialogue was the majority of the story, and I found that I didn't need much description because I knew how the characters looked as they said their lines. Facial expressions, hand gestures, et cetera, was left up to interpretation, and it wsa pretty neat to imagine!

Marlene and Mary's relationship is cute. Sirius was quite shocked, though. :)

Great story!

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~UnluckyStar57

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