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Review #1, by newgenerationlover 1) Tiredness and Tryouts

14th July 2014:
Hi there! Great start! I already really like all your characters, especially Rose. Though she isn't the main character, something about her character just really makes me like her :P I think you have begun to set up good relationships already, although Delaney seems to be somewhat of a drag. I understand that she isn't happy about not being on the team and all that, but leaving in a huff because Albus left to go talk with Hugo? That's a little much. Also, make sure that Albus and James don't go into the Mary Sue category. They seem alright now, but don't make them too perfect. I'm mainly just saying this because of your descriptions of how amazingly hot they are. But other than that, I think they seem like pretty good characters already. I'm interested into seeing where this is going. Happy writing!
-Mary

Author's Response: Hi Mary, Thanks for the review! The next bit should be up... soon XD Don't worry, Both Albus and James are going to have their flaws I'll make sure of it haha.

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