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Review #1, by peacock33 Chapter Three: Falling In Love Is Never Easy

22nd October 2014:
It is interesting to see them happy and sweet together as we don't really get much of that in UP. It's too bad that all the love and sweetness is tainted by knowing what Scorpius does later. And it makes me cringe a little to think of him doing and saying similar things with Dom, and telling her that he had chosen the wrong Weasley and he wished he had never gotten with Rose (which I think Dom tells Flick he actually said to her). So this all is pretty bittersweet and makes me think, poor Rosie!
I love having Rose's POV. And I hope we get some of Scorpius' in your other spinoffs, as he really is an enigma whose actions don't really make sense to me. So I would be interested to find out how he is capable of doing everything that happens with Dom (from the cheating to getting together with her after he and Rose breakup) if he cares about Rose as much as he seems to.
Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Hey,

It's definitely different to them in UP especially as this is their younger years as well so they're still innocent and naive. That as they are primarily the focus in UP too. I can assure you he and Dom didn't that much talking, but when they did he said things in the moment/whilst drunk. He does at one point but it isn't because he loves Dom, more because he preferred the physical side of things.

Rose's POV is fun, but it's quite hard especially the upcoming chapters as they linked to UP very closely. At the moment I'm not sure about Scorp's POV, for me male POV's are hard since I am female, but we shall see. That may change in the future but right now I have no plans for it.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

-Potterfan310
Sophie :)


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Review #2, by xoxo Chapter Two: Knight In Slytherin Armour

14th July 2014:
rose and scorp are both adorable together and gosh i want them to date so bad

love it!

xoxo

Author's Response: Hi,

I adore ScoRose so I agree a hundred per cent. They do don't you worry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-Potterfan310


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Review #3, by Midnight spark Chapter Two: Knight In Slytherin Armour

1st July 2014:
So this is how Rose falls for Scorpius, eh? I read Unexpected Parenthood, and I'm sad that they will break apart because of what Scorpius did with Dom. Anyways, I love Rose's view on their life! :)

Author's Response: Hi!

Why yes it is :)

I love writing UP and I'm sad it's nearly over. As much as I love ScoRose I had to throw this twist in.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope there has be more soon!

-Potterfan310


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Review #4, by Erinn Chapter One: The Start Of A Friendship

15th June 2014:
Hello darling, it's me, still to lazy to sign in. I loved reading this story and I can't wait to see what you do with this story.

On a side note, as I mentioned in my other review I woul love your help with my story. Email me some time
Erinn1197 @ yahoo . Com

Xoxo
Erinn

Author's Response: Hey, again!!

Aww thank you hun, it's only going to be a short one but it covers quite a bit, mostly the important things in Rose and Scorp's relationship.

I've emailed you hun, but I'm not free for the summer until next week x

-Soph xx


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Review #5, by Anonymous Chapter One: The Start Of A Friendship

6th June 2014:
I like this story. Please update soon your writing is so good. Same goes for Unexpected Parenthood.

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I may update on the weekend but I'm super busy so no promises.

I'm glad you are enjoying both. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

-Potterfan310 :)


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Review #6, by luna Chapter One: The Start Of A Friendship

12th May 2014:
i realy like this beginning, even though i don't get why lily and hugo are only 5 years old.

Author's Response: Thank for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you like it. As I said in my author's note, my dates do differ from the Deathly Hallows epilogue because it was necessary for the story what with Lily and Hugo being the same age as Flick's (from Unexpected Parenthood) sister Tessa is the same age as them and they are friends.

-Potterfan310


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Review #7, by Court Chapter One: The Start Of A Friendship

12th May 2014:
I'm so glad you are doing a story about Rose from her perspective! She is still my favorite character and the only one I really liked and respected by the end of the story, although at least the others seemed to be learning from their mistakes and will hopefully improve with time. And it's interesting they those four were all in Slytherin as they all definitely exhibited some negative, Slytherinesque qualities in Unexpected Parenthood. I liked how you showed all their first reactions to Hogwarts. It would be amazing! It's sad to see the cousins all so close and to think about what Dom and Scorpius are going to do to Rose in the future. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Hi!

Due to the whole Rose/Scorp/Dom revelation I just knew that even with a sequel it wouldn't cut it as there is a lot to be explained. So an idea for a short story about Rose as well as Dom was always at the back of my mind.

I love writing Rose and I do think in Unexpected Parenthood she is a bit of a bystander/background character, because whilst she is friends with Flick and Al, she is a Gryffindor therefore not around all the time.

Unexpected Parenthood isn't over yet, there's still six chapters left. They are learning from their mistakes and if you've read chapter 44 you see Flick going to speak to Rose, then in chapters 45 and 46 (which aren't up just yet) she goes to see Dom and Scorp to get their perspectives on things and talk.

They do all have their traits to be in Slytherin, so you're certainly right there! Well all except Rose of course. I love writing this chapter because of course they're all still young and carefree right now. They have no idea what's in store for them in the future. Hogwarts is still the magical school for them where they'll learn things compared to what they think of it in Unexpected Parenthood, i.e Flick thinking of it as the place she got pregnant, Rose with getting with and breaking up with Scorp, Al thinking of it as the place he found out he was a dad and of course for Dom where she messed up.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means a lot!! :D

-Potterfan310


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