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Review #1, by Infinityx Going Too Far

12th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 review

Hello! I absolutely love the premise of your story. I adore canon and wouldn't have it any other way, but I have wondered how this moment would have gone if Ron hadn't left, and if all the events following it - Godric's Hollow, the sword - if everything would remain the same.

I really like how you've characterized the three of them, staying true to canon. The only part which felt a little off to me was the part when Harry and Ron talk about their feelings so easily. I know Ron feels guilty and ashamed, but I think he would still be a little bit self conscious during their exchange. But that's just my opinion. :)

This was a great first chapter and I enjoyed reading it. I'm interested to see where you take it as well. Good luck and update soon!

Author's Response: Well, then, be prepared for another chapter soon :) and expect a thank you on my next one!

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