Reading Reviews for The Founders of Hogwarts
  
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Review #1, by Freda_and_Georgina Rowena's Realization

8th December 2014:
Why. Must. You. Write. So. Intriguingly? I am seriously on edge, I want to see Rebekah teach! I want to know what Riddle will do! I want to see what will happen to Snape! I want to know what Helga will do with her cup! I want to stop sounding like a three-year-old child throwing a tantrum.

Love your plot line, want the next chapter. (as you can probably tell)
--Georgina

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Review #2, by Freda_and_Georgina Death Comes...

5th December 2014:
How did everyone find out about the prophecy? Did I miss that part? Death personified the way he is caught me off guard, though it did work for the story. Oh my gosh, Neville is so sweet, I want to pull a Helga and comfort him every time I read that. I love the founders' relationships though it seems odd that Rebekah is the only child brought back to life (excluding Helena). I assume it's because Godric and Helga never had children.

I keep saying it, every chapter you throw something new into the mix, and I'm left wondering what'll happen next.
--Georgina

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Review #3, by Freda_and_Georgina Sirius's Revenge

5th December 2014:
This is a nice chapter. I wish the horcrux put up more of a fight so we could see more of Sirius' fears. I really like all the information you give and absolutely love the detail of Tonks hiding behind Remus. Would Kreacher know that the locket was a horcrux? Doesn't matter, it's a minor detail anyway.

I love your story and your style of writing, though generally it is a tad choppy. When you begin writing again, look to make it flow a little more. Other than that, you're doing a great job, keep it up.

Hope to see you writing again soon.
--Georgina

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Review #4, by Freda_and_Georgina Looking Back

3rd December 2014:
Rebekah is such a mother (as if you needed to hear that). I wish there was a little bit more internal struggle as to revealing herself during the battle or not, but it still worked out. This is a really nice story, giving just enough description and plot line to keep the chapter understandable and exciting. One thing to note, your chapter summaries are a little bit lackluster, you might want to make them more intriguing with a quote or something (if you so wish, of course).

Can't wait to read more!
--Georgina

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Review #5, by Freda_and_Georgina Looking Foward

29th November 2014:
This is really interesting. It almost doesn't have to be and AU, almost. The plot line is so grabbing that I can't find a critique, I'm too busy trying to read the next paragraph. It is so cool to see Salazar as a father. One thing that did catch me off guard was all the explaining. It seemed like a lot in one sitting, just something to note.

Look forward to reading more.
--Georgina

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Review #6, by td Death Comes...

28th February 2014:
Woww..weird story,but nice too!!Please write more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I have another chapter waiting to be validated so hopefully it gets posted soon. I'm glad you like it!

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Review #7, by befuddledbroomsticks Looking Back

19th February 2014:
This is really interesting, it's kind of weird but I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know it's a little different but I had the idea and had to get it out. I'm so glad you like it!

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