Reading Reviews for Lost Princess
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Review #1, by L Rejection Hurts

27th November 2015:
Draco would never say "ain't" and please correct the King's grammar... "Me and the Queen" is not grammatically correct. It should reads "The Queen and I".

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Review #2, by Sarah The Year of Hell

8th July 2014:
Great story!! Looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you ive just started writing it now.

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Review #3, by Chrissy Great Revalations.

23rd May 2014:
I just saw your comment, and omg I would be honored if you did :-)

Author's Response: Im glad you think so im writing the next chapter your name will appear thanks for the idea.

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Review #4, by Chrissy Great Revalations.

20th May 2014:
Oooh this story is certainly interesting. I can't wait to read more. But when Hermione got slapped at the end of the chapter, it makes me think that the person was Lavender. Seems like something that she would do. I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you for you review and i havent decided who slapped her yet. Didnt think about lavender? May consider it. If i do can i mention you in the opening paragraph. Please keep reading will update soon.

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Review #5, by Emily Rejection Hurts

7th May 2014:
I am loving this story! I up usually hate it when the author changes hermiones looks and name, (like she would ever actually do that!) but in this story it works so well! Even though she has a new identity, Hermione still shines through. Brilliant work! Please, please update soon!! xoxo Emily

Author's Response: Thank you so much ive got writers block at the moment will update really soon. Any ideas or suggestions are more than welcome.

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Review #6, by Lovely Jane Rejection Hurts

18th April 2014:
This is new. I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: hey lovely jane,
im glad you enjoyed it i hadnt seen anything else like this before so i thought id write im still learning. so any tips or advice or ideas would be greatly appreciated. I will get my new chapter up soon, got a little writers block at the moment. Please keep reading.Thanks again.

LilyPotter1307 xx

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Review #7, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Life is a lie!

7th March 2014:
For Blackout Bingo.


I don't read many Hermione-is-actually-someone-else stories, there are just so many and they usally follow the same plot. But this is different, she's not a Zabini. It's quite interesting to see her as a princess for the wizarding world.

I like how she still considers the Grangers her parents and hasn't just abandoned them now that she's someone else. Although, I do think that her going to see her real home is a little fast. Maybe if she was going because of her curiosity, but not because she feels it's her place. But that's just my personal opinion.

I assume her godparents are the Malfoys and the son she's betrothed to is Draco... :)

Interesting start.


Author's Response: Thank you sam. I thought that hermione would want to do whats best for other people. But thank you so much for reviewing. Please keep reading and reviewing i would love your opinion x

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