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Review #1, by kassandra466 Not Another One

20th August 2014:
Awe, how cute, I really enjoyed that.

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Review #2, by Rumpelstiltskin Not Another One

17th March 2014:
Hey there, I'm here for Blackout Bingo (20/20)!

Plot/plot arch: This was cute! The introduction set up the setting and whatnot nicely. Christmas at the Burrow by this point in time, I can imagine, would be utter chaos with all of those Weasleys running about. I love that Harry tells Ginny that wants more children, and what I love even more is those names he's picked out. Poor girl, being named Hedwig (though I understand the sentiment). At least if they were to have a boy, his name would be Felix. The ending was particularly sweet ♥ !

Characterization: I think you've pretty much nailed Harry and Ginny, of course, altered slightly to compensate for them being older and having a family. The children are cute, and each seems to have their own individual personality, which is fantastic!

Detail: You've done a great job with adding descriptions in this! Everything comes together to paint some complete images and I think that it ties together nicely.

Emotion: This was sweet, and it definitely made me laugh!

Other/notes: Thanks for the light and fluffy fic! You did an amazing job!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hi!

Whoop for Blackout bingo :D

Christmas at The Burrow would definitely be a big family affair, I'm certain of it. Poor her indeed, although I suppose Hedwig could be shorted to Heddy, it sounds less weird, lol.

I was a bit wary of Harry and Ginny so thank you!!

Thanks for the review, it made me smile :D

-Potterfan310


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Review #3, by LilyEPotter Not Another One

4th February 2014:
Oh my goodness, how sweet and how incredibly funny at the same time. I couldn't help but laugh at the names that he had thought up.

Author's Response: Thank you! Harry's got some vivid idea's!

Thanks for R+R'ing!

-Potterfan310


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Review #4, by iamatree Not Another One

9th December 2013:
I liked this little story, it has a cute little insight into a day in the Potter household. But Ginny was very composed - if my husband said to me he wanted a baby because he had a name I'd punch him in the unmentionables.
Just a quick thing, there are a few grammatical errors which, if sorted, would make it flow much smoother as the reader wouldn't have to keep re-reading to get the correct meaning. But the story itself is fun, keep it up!

Author's Response: Hi there,

Thank you! I think my reasoning for Ginny being so composed is that a part of her knew he might have been joking.

Thanks for pointing that out, it's un-beta'ed and grammar isn't my strong point. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you liked it!

-Potterfan310


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Review #5, by Bethan Not Another One

7th December 2013:
Aw, this made me smile so much on a day that seems to be getting progressively worse... such a funny/sweet ending! Well done, a great one-shot!

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Potterfan310


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Review #6, by newgenerationlover Not Another One

5th December 2013:
Love the story! Literally died at Hedwig Dobby haha

Author's Response: Thanks, haha Harry has some crazy ideas!

Thanks for R+R'ing!

-Potterfan310


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