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Review #1, by Aakanksha Chapter 5

12th October 2014:
Please, please ,please update!!
I just cant wait to read more. And what happens to 'The four'(timothy,and the hufflepuffs)? I just hope nothing happens to Al!
You're such a good writer, I'm surprised why you haven't got more reviews.

Author's Response: Thankyou, Thankyou, Thankyou!!! Don't worry! There plenty more to come from those four! Aw bless you!

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Review #2, by Lola X Chapter 5

12th October 2014:
OMG! I got so excited to find out you hadn't just updated the story with ONE chapter but with TWO!!!

I don't understand why you only have a few reviews and a few readers, this story deserves a dobby award! I absolutely love the story line its so original and so intriguing!

I love the way the story is developing and how emelia and albus are devoloping especially with the fact that albus told her about the map and cloak. Deffo already ship them!!

I have a feeling Emelia is not a big fan of her dorm mates because of the way she talks about them. Would she class them as her friends, or people she just hangs around with, who does she normally hang around with? Does she have a best friend or someone she can confide in because it would be quite nice if she did have a friend who she was close to!

When Emelia got a detention wouldn't her parents have been told? I'm just asking because in a letter from her parents her mum said that she hadn't recieved a letter from school about Jack and his detentions so I'm just wondering wouldn't they recieve a letter about Emelias detention?

Emelia seems like a really intresting character shes a true gryffindor! She also tends to have good a rant about everything which is quite funny and adds a good characteristic to her!

I'm glad you haven't portrayed Albus as the quiet person who is constantly shadowed by James like in other stories, it does get boring when he is constantly portrayed like that, I'm glad he's confident and is a prankster. Would you ever do a chapter in Albus's pov?

Anthony is one of the biggest bullies I have ever heard of... and poor timothy, what a name! Davis is really making me question what he's up to, is he trying to be like the new voldermort but in a milder version? Is he trying to be in control of everyone? And why is whatever he's doing not working on Emelia and Albus! Aaah! So many questions!!

Can't wait for this story to progress! Sorry if the review doesn't make sense and the amount of questions I've asked! I just find this story really original, intresting and intriguing! I get so excited when you update! Please update soon!

Lola X

Author's Response: A DOBBY?!?!? I MAY OR MAY NOT BE JUMPING FROM WALLS YOU CUTE LITTLE MUFFIN!!! Hahahaha! I guess you can tell Emelia probably isn't the closest with her dorm mates but I guess you could say she'd class them as friends? I don't know exactly how well I may go into this in the story because I'm just taking it one chapter at a time but for a little special insiders note for anyone reader here we go: so I guess Emelia is quite used to be to her self, very much independent work. She'll class people as her friends and will get along with people but doesn't necessarily found a connection with someone as her absolute best friend but I guess we'll have to see how her character develops and if this changes over time :) as for the detention, I'm praying I haven't stuffed this up but I'm pretty sure she recovered the letter before she'd carried out the prank and received the detention. Don't worry, I know this is a teaser but there's a lot more to come with the follow up on her detention! As for a chapter in Albus' POV, I don't know if I will actually get around to it in this story, I'm sorry! I just don't get a vibe about it. But if you would really like me to, I'm more than happy to either do a one shot with Emelia/Albus his POV possibly after I'm done with the story. Side note: you can probably count on that or at least an epilogue because I'm not going to lie, Emelia/Albus one shot would be sweet and I'm absolutely in love with the idea because Albus feels!!! Alright, I think that's it! THANKYOU SO MUCH AGAIN AND AH I NEED TO STOP TALKING YOU GETTING TOO MUCH PLOT OUT OF ME!!!

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Review #3, by Aakanksha Chapter 3

12th October 2014:
Awesome. I'm a mystery fan,so this is just my cup of tea. You're a really good writer, have you written anything else besides hpff?

Author's Response: Awww Thankyou so much! Nothing else besides a few short stories from school :)

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Review #4, by guest Chapter 3

4th September 2014:
I really really like this story the plot seems so interesting. Can't wait for more! Please update soon its been a whole month! XXX

Author's Response: I'm super glad you're intrigued by the plot and ah! It's so exciting hearing you guys get excited for more chapters!!! And I'm super super super duper sorry on how late a chapter update is! I've finally got a week break and I'm working on getting the next chapter out so stay tuned for that! And maybe even a little something extra for all you special little snowflakes who are positively charming and patience!!! :)

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Review #5, by VeronicaOlivia Chapter 3

30th July 2014:
This story is very intriguing and I honestly cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Can't wait to bring you guys more! :D

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Review #6, by VeronicaOlivia Chapter 1

30th July 2014:
I love the way you started off, it is very detailed and descriptive - it feels like I am there. I also love the character of Emelia already, she is very relatable and funny. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Good to see I'm on the right track. I was a bit eh about the start because I really wanted something that would be like wow! And amazing! But I'm glad the chapter is doing something well!

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Review #7, by AussieLottie Chapter 3

29th July 2014:
This is such an interesting story!!! You're really drawing me in :)

I'm thinking he's hypnotizing them or something... But the poor first year! :(

So I'll be looking for an update.. Hopefully that'll be soon? :D

10/10 and keep on writing!
~AussieLottie

Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!! It honestly makes scream with joy getting these reviews!! I know how it feels to be waiting for chapter uploads, believe I was an avid hpff reader and I know it's the most excruciating wait, and I'll try my hardest to put something up sooner then I did with the last chapter, but my degree is so full that yikes! Hardly any spare time! But I'm hoping at the latest mid semester break you'll get and update or I'll try for sooner! So it might be a couple of weeks and I'm sorry about that but hopefully it's worth the wait!! :)

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Review #8, by UnluckyStar57 Prologue

6th January 2014:
Hi! For the Eleventh Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing, it's all about mystery stories!

This one is definitely mysterious! Who could this suspicious new Headmaster be connected to? Death Eaters, perhaps? What could his plan be? It seems quite curious that he should want to accept the post after a year had passed. Will the mysterious vial in his pocket affect the students of Hogwarts? There are so many questions posed by this prologue, and I'm sure that a wild ride awaits Emelia and Jack at Hogwarts!

Great, mysterious prologue!!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! As for this suspicious new head master, I'm afraid we'll just have to wait and see. ;)

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Review #9, by SoaringPatronus Prologue

29th November 2013:
Hi! This seems like a great start and I'm excited to see where it goes. You seem like a good writer and the plot does not seem like one that has been repeated often so update soon!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'll be sure to pull out the next chapter very soon. :)

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