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Review #1, by UnluckyStar57 Prologue

6th January 2014:
Hi! For the Eleventh Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing, it's all about mystery stories!

This one is definitely mysterious! Who could this suspicious new Headmaster be connected to? Death Eaters, perhaps? What could his plan be? It seems quite curious that he should want to accept the post after a year had passed. Will the mysterious vial in his pocket affect the students of Hogwarts? There are so many questions posed by this prologue, and I'm sure that a wild ride awaits Emelia and Jack at Hogwarts!

Great, mysterious prologue!!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! As for this suspicious new head master, I'm afraid we'll just have to wait and see. ;)

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Review #2, by SoaringPatronus Prologue

29th November 2013:
Hi! This seems like a great start and I'm excited to see where it goes. You seem like a good writer and the plot does not seem like one that has been repeated often so update soon!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'll be sure to pull out the next chapter very soon. :)

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