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Review #1, by Lostmyheart Shackles of Fear

8th April 2014:
Hi!

I love dark and scary stories, so this intrigued me.
This almost gave me the creeps... how you decribed his fear and how it affected him. It was so realistic that it made me think that either you are scared of the darkness yourself, or that you know someone who is. Because all that he went through, all his thoughts, I can imagine a person afraid of the dark think like that too.

I'm not entirely afraid of the dark, only when I can't get out of it - like if I was in a dark room and couldn't find the door. To imagine that poor little Colin feels like that all the time, is heart breaking. And didn't he see the Basilisk in his first year?

Anyway, you wrote this story so realistically and the ending made my heart ache. I have a weakness for tragic stories, so when you wrote 'Please let me wake up' I loved and hated it at the same time.

It was wonderful to read it!

Big hug,
Avi

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Review #2, by Warp. Shackles of Fear

3rd December 2013:
Wow. All ur writing is flawless. This was so emotional!

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much!!! *squishes* You've made my day :D

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Review #3, by Cannons Shackles of Fear

4th November 2013:
Hey, I'm still doing that review every story of yours thing and I saw that you had won third place in this so I had to come and read!

YEAH, it was scary. You made it so realistic especially how he was paralysed with fear and didn't remember he could make light at will.

There were lots of great lines in here, I particularly liked -

I was drowning in my own fear, the weight of the darkness pressing heavily on me until I was sure I would be crushed by it. - that's so realistic, I can imagine how scary that would be if you were scared of the dark.

It was a great idea to make his nightmares come true, although I don't want him to die!

A nice one shot, you deserved third place!

:)

Cannons

Author's Response: Awww thank you :D I really hope that you enjoy my stories :D

Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm glad that you found it scary, I wanted to try and get his fear across so I'm glad that I achieved that.

I don't want him to die either ;( It broke my heart to write this story!

Thank you so much!!! :D


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Review #4, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Shackles of Fear

28th October 2013:
What? No. NO! TAMMI! ;(

...You killed me. AND COLIN! HE WAS SO SAD AND SCARED, THEN THE LIGHT STARTED TO COME BACK AND THERE WAS HOPE, THEN... THEN... WHY? ;(

I'm sad. I don't know how to survive this sadness.

But it was so good, so amazingly written. And it was awesome that you eluded to what happens at the end, BUT I KNOW! Oh, his nightmares are so horrible and they came true!

I'm going to cry in the corner now.

Sam.

Author's Response: SAM!! I'm so sorry!!!

*Hugs you extra tightly* It'll be okay. It won't be okay! I've killed him!

Why did I have to put him through his worst fear? And make him relive it? I'm so sad!!

Thank you so much! Yep we all know what's happened to him. I wish that I could change it, but I can't and that breaks my heart more than it already is. ;(

I shall have to cry with you :(

Thank you for the review Sam!



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