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Review #1, by HufflePuff_Blitz What's the matter, Hugo?

1st October 2013:
Oh such wonderful shenanigans :) I knew Hugo was so adorably mischievous from the start but I didn't expect rose to be plotting too! Awesome story keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh they are both as mischievous as the other.

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Review #2, by AlexFan What's the matter, Hugo?

30th September 2013:
Oh my goodness this was brilliant! When I gave you that quote I thought for sure that you'd asked to switch because how on earth could someone write a story with a quote like that.

May I just say that you did so brilliantly. That was absolutely hilarious. I seriously bow down to you for being able to use such a random quote in this way.

The relationship between Hugo and Rose is the typical brother-sister relationship that a lot of people have but you made it so funny. Hugo really does whine though, honestly, I've never met anyone in my life who whines more than Hugo and that's including my brother when he's in a bad mood.

The ending though where they high-fived was absolutely brilliant. Right then was when I knew that those two were really evil geniuses. I hadn't seen that coming at all though, I just assumed that they were actually fighting and didn't really get along.

Ron's line where he almost swore had me laughing so hard. It seemed like such a Ron thing to say. That was my favourite line and probably my favourite part from this story.

Brilliant one-shot!
~Grace

Author's Response: AWww yay!!! I am so happy that you liked this! I must admit I did struggle for a while, and there was a whole Dean and Seamus story planned, but I wasn't sure I'd be able to write it in time. But then this idea happened. :D

Thank you so much!

Haha Hugo does whine a lot doesn't he? I'm not sure if I could put up with him for as long as anyone has :P

Oh yeah, they had been planning this for a while :P

Yay!! When I wrote that I thought it was such a Ron thing to do, so I'm glad that you agree as well.

Thanks so much for the lovely reviews!! You're amazing!!


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Review #3, by The Misfit What's the matter, Hugo?

30th September 2013:
TAMMI! :D I get the first review on this new one-shot, woo!

I love Hugo as a child! He seems very spoilt (in a nice way, if that makes sense?) and it's fun seeing his thought processes as he decides it's no good trying to persuade his dad, he'll have to persuade his mum :P

I haven't read many stories depicting Ron and Hermione as parents, but I have to say I like Hermione's characterization in this one! She's very firm, but sweet - she reminds me a little of Molly :3

Hugo's reaction to salad and extra-light mayo is hilarious XD I love them now, but I remember hating them as a kid :P Tut tut, they shouldn't have been fighting... AND OMG! HE SPOILED THE BOOK! That's readership sinning! :O

I loved the ending though! ♥ It was definitely fun to read and their plan was really amusing and definitely the kind of thing that kids their age with come up with :P Good luck with the challenge, Tammi!

Author's Response: ISOBEL! YAY! I'm so glad!!

I'm so glad that you love Hugo as a child, he is incredibly spoilt and he also knows how to manipulate his parents. :P

Aww I'm so glad that you think that! :D Molly has obviously taught her well! :D

Haha oh Hugo! He really hates salad and light mayo. :P Hugo was so fun to write in this!

Who would have thought that Hugo and Rose would have paired up? :P Thank you so much! *hugs* You're the best!!


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