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Review #1, by a fan lol The Room of Requirement

23rd September 2013:
whoa. so good. awesome

Author's Response: Thank you! I think this'll have another chapter or two then be done since it's just a short story. :) Thanks for reviewing! :)
~MadiMalfoy x


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Review #2, by jane The Room of Requirement

14th September 2013:
This story is going to be fab!!! I love it, you're style is good and I'm on edge the whole time I'm reading, I will be reading on :D
I love Dramione! xx

Author's Response: OMR thank you!! This isn't my main project, just a piece I did for a challenge but wanted to continue a little bit. This should be finished up in a chapter or two! Go check out my Dramione-focused novel if you want some more dark and angsty stuff! Thanks for the wonderful review! :)
~MadiMalfoy x


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Review #3, by Sonya The Alcove

13th September 2013:
Love the story so far! I don't usually ship Dramione, but for some reason as of late I've been yes! and I must say this story seems to be heading in the right direction for me to love them together, they do actually make sense.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! It always makes me happy to know my story has converted someone to a Dramione shipper! This isn't going to be my main focus for right now as I've got other challenges I need to write first, along with updating my novel. I'm not one of those people who writes them as this couple who falls in love instantly, not following canon at all! Anywho, thank you for the lovely review, stay tuned for more! :)
~MadiMalfoy x


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Review #4, by Siriusly89 The Alcove

10th September 2013:
Hello! Siriusly89 here, reviewing your challenge entry. Thank you very much for entering in the first place!

Aaah, now Iím just going to come right out and say it. Iím not altogether all that fond of Dramione, but Iíll look at this with an open mind, donít worry! I just mightnít be as well-knowledged about them as others, and for that I apologise!

Ah, well you set up Hermione studying in the secluded corridor very well, it made sense, and you know, it wasnít like you just plonked her there for the sake of the plot, it made sense. The wafting cologne bit made me gag, just because its Draco and heís an evil canevil until he leaves Hogwarts, but I can see the allure that might eventually draw her to him, bad-boy and all that jazz!

After such a fabulous first paragraph, the other two feltÖ.slightly rushed? If that made any sense. They sort of let the whole thing down a little, not drastically or anything, but maybe it might be worth casting another glance over that bit, and beefing it up a little. A small bit of babbling goes a very long way!

I like it, we get to see some of Dracoís anxiety about the whole Voldemort-situation. And his little comment about him being weirded out at him even being alive made me giggle slightly, I can just see him sitting there going ĎBut, but, youíre supposed to be d-e-a-dí and sorry, I know that humour wasnít a main aim for this novel, but I found that funny!

No, Draco isnít supposed to love her already. No, he isnít allowed to be all human and things, he needs to be a mean old meanie. Stop trying to change my opinion of him :P Iím joking, of course!

Okay, the last moment was pretty sweet, Iíve got to admit. I still am not a Dramione fan,, but that definitely was sweet!

Thank you again for entering my challenge! Results shall be posted by the end of the week!

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're not very fond of Dramione, it was the easiest thing to combine this challenge with! But thank you for being openminded. :) I will agree with you that the paragraphs after the first were a little rushed, but I am planning on editing those tonight to beef them up and maybe add some dialogue between the trio, as you've suggested!

Hey, if I write unintentional humor, that's usually my best humor! I'm a very sarcastic person so it's hard for me to write humor...anyway, I'm glad you thought that was funny to kind of lighten the story up a bit!

I absolutely love writing Draco and I wanted to show that he really was scared that the Dark Lord was back, etc etc because he knew what it really meant for him. Oh come on, everyone's human! :P I made sure not to make him too comfortable though, being very stiff at first and taking a little bit to relax at her touch.

This was such a fun challenge and I love all of the ones you host so I'll definitely be back for more!! :)
~MadiMalfoy x


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