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Review #1, by adele_weasley Nine

4th March 2014:
Nice fic, I think the story line is good and has potential, but maybe you should choose your words differently...I mean, it is sometimes hard to follow, you know? I get tired reading it. But once again, it has potential, don't stop writing because of the lack of reviews ;) Do it because you like it, then for the readers.

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Review #2, by shadeslayer Two

29th October 2013:
I love the interaction between her family members. The 'Arty Farty' bit made this seem really realistic.

Author's Response: Thank you:) That's what I was going for:) I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
FirenIce


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Review #3, by shadeslayer One

29th October 2013:
This has a really good story line to it. Even the summary is good, which is difficult for many. I would only suggest getting someone to proofread before you submit. You should be able to request one in the forums.

Author's Response: Thank you for your response, yes I realize that I have many grammatical mistakes, and I am thinking about getting someone to proof read my chapters. I have done some editing to the other chapters so hopefully the grammar gets better.
FireIce


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Review #4, by healedheartless Six

17th September 2013:
Its a very good story line, but you should have someone edit it for you. The grammatical errors change the tone of your writing.

Author's Response: hey thanks for reviewing. Haha, yeah I know I have poor grammar I'll look into someone pre-viewing it.
FirenIce


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