17 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Avanell 2 Survival Versus Protection

18th April 2014:
Very intriguing, and how interesting things played out and rose's reactions. LOVED her besting that awful Higgs, but as for Tess...at first, lovely but now...oh, no! Brilliant update!

Author's Response: Thanks Avanell2! I am grateful for all of your reviews, they're great, and they really are encouraging! I'm glad you liked this chapter, and, honestly, I'm really excited to explore Rose's interactions with the Mannings. They're interesting characters. :) Thanks again!

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Review #2, by delacourweasley The Stormclouds

18th April 2014:
Hey so I love your story please keep writing but could you tell me how to make a banner I just started and I have no clue how to get one up there

Author's Response: Hi! No problem, it took me forever to figure out how to do it ;)
First: go to HP Forums(link-top of the page)
Second: scroll down the first page to "Help Needed" -click on the link
Third: click the first link "Banners & Graphics" -this will redirect you to the Dark Arts Forums (which is where HP artists congregate)
Fourth: click on first link "Welcome!"
Fifth: scroll down to the PINNED "Notice! Please Read"
Sixth: Follow ALL the directions on the first post, be patient, they do try to do all of the security stuff quickly :)
Seventh: Go back to the Dark Arts main page, scroll down to the "Requesting Arena" section, click on the link "HPFF Banner Requests"
Eighth: scroll down until you see the PINNED, READ ME link "Complete Rule Guide & Request Forms" -follow all the directions there AND THEN, when your banner is complete,
Ninth: go to the PINNED link "How Do I Get My Banner into my Story?"

I hope that helps, and, again I know it looks like a lot but the moderators do make the process move quickly. :)

If you want to make it yourself then you could make the banner and fill the request for yourself, but you still have to be a regular member of the forums to do that.

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Review #3, by paddlewaddle Survival Versus Protection

18th April 2014:
I wonder if there is going to be a time jump after this incident? or if this story is going to stay in the first few years of school? because this is a brilliant fic but I also want to see them grow and advance into 5th/6th/7th as these characters have so much potential! I love the constant theme of Rose having to prove/find herself as a Weasley and a Slytherin, both concepts which are almost completely mutually exclusive events, yet Rose is both and at 11, handling all these emotions is a bit hard when you are forced to be more mature, rather than to learn and grow from smaller experiences slowly.

I can't believe there is so much drama for year 1 but I hope we can see more of how Rose's relationships (with her family, new friends and Albus and Scorpius) develop further down the track, cause I do believe Slytherin's can be good - Chrissy, I think deep down is someone who wishes to desperately escape what she was bought up to become. And of course, the dynamic between Scorpius and Rose - his reasons for always attempting to help her, even if she doesn't want it, and even though she knows of all that he has done for her, she still can't trust him - I'm looking forward to seeing Rose trust him slowly and surely down the track, maybe as they get older.

I think there are one or two spelling/grammatical errors/missing words here and there at the beginning of this chapter but overall, I can't wait to know what happens next.

Author's Response: Hi!
Yeah, this story is leading up to another story. The next story will take place in their 6th or 7th year. I thought that there would be a lot that would happen this year and that it would set the stage for the rest of their school career. This also means, though, that relationships between the main characters are only going to be implied thus far. I was just thinking about how much more mature Rose is than I was at that age. You're definitely right, it has so much to do with all the stuff that's been happening to her. Also, I'm really interested in exploring Slytherin in these stories and all it's aspects, considering how I am one myself! Thanks for your review! I really do appreciate them! :)

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Review #4, by Avanell 2 The Stormclouds

29th March 2014:
Very interesting outcome and also Rose's discussion with Malfoy. And oh, the dream! Great update!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked it, especially the dream (I was nervous about that part:) )I want to get the next one up as soon as I can. Thank you too,Avanell2, for being such a loyal reviewer!

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Review #5, by HazelMidnight172 The Malfoy Day

8th March 2014:
I don't think I've read another Rose-in-Slytherin story before, this is really interesting! The back-stories of all the characters are starting to come out, and some of them are pretty intriguing. I'm looking forward to your next update. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it! I hope you enjoy the next chapter too. :)

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Review #6, by HazelMidnight172 The Train

7th March 2014:
Wow! What a strong start! I love the stuff about muggles being oblivious, it is so true! They do seem to ignore what they don't want to see, don't they? Looking forward to reading this story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

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Review #7, by Avanell 2 The Malfoy Day

24th January 2014:
Very intriguing, interesting chapter! Loved it :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you. :) I'm glad you thought so, I've been trying to figure out how to get Chrissy's past in there. It's kind of difficult. Thanks for all the reviews! They really do help! :)

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Review #8, by Leeu The Train

10th December 2013:
I liked it a lot, sounds like it will be an interesting story. I like how you made them totally unaware of their parents history, it will be interesting to see how that plays out!

Author's Response: Thanks Leeu, I'm glad you liked it. :) I've been working on the sixth chapter and hope that'll be up soon!

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Review #9, by AriesGirl40 Family Matters

29th September 2013:
For the love of sausages, saved a family friendship. I liked this chapter. Al is a loving cousin. He can stay at the table :)

Author's Response: I'm happy Al's back too. :) Although, he and Rose are going to have to put up with a lot of blarney because of it!

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Review #10, by Avanell 2 Family Matters

21st September 2013:
Fabulous, wonderful update...especially loved the letters Rose got, Malfoy talking to Al, and Al joining the Slytherin table :D


Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorry it took a while for me to reply I've had a ton of work at school. :/ I'm proud of the chapter title, too, as you can probably guess, not so cut and dry as earlier. :) This was a really fun to write, and I liked getting Al in the story again. More of that to come!

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Review #11, by Avanell 2 Rose's New Friends

11th September 2013:
That was really nice and fun to read! Excellent update :D

Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing this chapter, especially the last bit at the end, so I'm glad you liked it! :)

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Review #12, by AriesGirl40 Rose's New Friends

10th September 2013:
I liked the chapter, and Roses new friends. They seem like they really want to get to know her.

Author's Response: Thanks, I love Lima and Chrissy, I'm really happy you liked them too. :)

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Review #13, by Avanell Hogwarts

6th September 2013:
She's starting to shine, even if still alone. Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you thought so too. :)

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Review #14, by AriesGirl40 The Sorting

1st September 2013:
I enjoyed reading this chapter. Loved the drama and the eloquent wording. Keep this up, I'll see you at the Dobbies next season :)

well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for the support! I really appreciate it. :)

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Review #15, by Avanell 2 The Sorting

29th August 2013:
Your title first caught my eye because of missing my muse...see my story (ancient ones) titles to see why, lol.
Gregorovitch? Very familiar name to me, lol. Loved the wand scene, and how it connects with her. Can't wait for her to really prove herself!

Author's Response: Thanks! The titles are really similar. :) I can't think of what else to call them so I just kept them short. lol Thanks again. :)

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Review #16, by Avanell 2 The Train

23rd August 2013:
Interesting first chapter! When she gets in, not only will she be a first Weasley in Slytherin (? with history, one never knows) AND Weasleys will represent ALL four houses! Nice intro to Scorpius and his quiet, smelly friend, lol!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

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Review #17, by AriesGirl40 The Train

21st August 2013:
Interesting chapter for chapter one. Im going to give a decent review for chapter two, I need more information to go on for one of those.
I shall see you next week for chapter two

Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy you liked it :)

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