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Review #1, by Iellwen I'm sorry

15th March 2014:
Hi there! So I was slithering around your author's page and just couldn't resist a Dramione (and I'm glad^^)!!

It was such an emotional read!
Draco and Hermione's pain, love and longing to be together but they can't because he's on a mission - heartbreaking!!

The characterization is awesome - even though the setting is vague, it's all still credible!
I love the way you showed Draco's weaker side and, at the same time, him putting his family above all else!

Spotted a few tiny bugs (hardly worth mentioning) on my way here :D
'I am Hermione.' kinda confused me at first - maybe adding a comma would smooth it over a bit? ^^
You had little spacing issue at
'[...] she hadn't realised that
Draco had used a [no-spoiling] on her until it was too late.'

It was a great read, thank you!!

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Review #2, by adluvshp I'm sorry

13th March 2014:
Blackout Battle 5/6

This was a short yet touching piece and I liked reading it. I am a DraMione shipper too and I think this "moment" was beautifully portrayed. It was sweet how Hermione was trying to convince Draco that everything would be okay and he wasn't useless and that there was a way out.

On the other hand, I felt for Draco as he thought he had no choice. The ending bit was particularly sad as how Draco pressed a kiss on her frozen form's forehead and how tears fell from her eyes.

The dialogue was also nicely written and the overall narrative touched my heart. There were typos that I spotted, one of them being "fallen on death ears" instead of "deaf ears".

But apart from that, this was very sweet and sad and I loved it. The tragedy of Draco/Hermione and poor broken Draco were so well portrayed. Good job =)

--AD
(AditiDraco95)

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Review #3, by ATLpaintingflowers I'm sorry

9th August 2013:
Hey you won 2nd place!
OHMYGOD. I fell in love with this, I really did. Are you sure this is your first ever Dramione, because you did really well. The characterization was very well done; it wasn't over the top, and it was believable. I think you showed the deeper sides of each of them without making it fake. I really liked that. I loved the plot, and how you showed Draco's feelings about what he had to do. I never liked Draco/Hermione much, but I really really liked this.

Author's Response: :O THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :D
I'm so glad that you fell in love with this, it's my first time ever writing a Dramione, so I'm glad that you think I wrote it well and got the characterizations across.
Thank you so much! I wanted to try and get across the difficult times they would go through if they had ever been together.
I'm so tempted to write more Dramiones now :D
Thank you so much for your amazing review! :D


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Review #4, by MissBookWorm I'm sorry

23rd July 2013:
This short excerpt is really well written and I'm sad that it wont become a full story. But I do love it.

MissBookWorm

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I may one day change it into a full story? I'm not too sure yet. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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