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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Meenazeawesome Chapter eight

24th August 2013:
OMG Cliffhanger? Seriously:)? I can't wait 4 next chapter!

Author's Response: It's finished, it's waiting to be validated - Rowan

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Review #2, by Meena Chapter seven

19th August 2013:
I love this whole story! My only advice is to venture a bit deeper into Scorpius's crush. After all, who doesn't like a bit of romance? ;)

Author's Response: :), just wait for the end of the story

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Review #3, by Diezal325 Chapter four

8th August 2013:
Omg. Lol!!! I love it- plz write more!

Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter is online - RC

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Review #4, by StellaRose Chapter one

5th August 2013:
Hey there! Saw your story and thought I'd give it a go! I think your plot idea is cute, so many possibilities! I like that you found a unique way for them to interact without using the stereotypical Weasley vs. Malfoy technique.

A few ccs to help you out. Go back and look at the first paragraph. You have a few run on sentences that could easily be fixed. There are also a few instances where you have comma just hanging out for example: "Yeah." I jumped up,

I jumped up could probably be a complete sentence and go down by "Excuse me, I have to do something."

All in all though, you have a good start and a good idea. You just need a little tweaking :) Idk if you've been on the forums but they have both a review and a beta reader thread. They're both definitely great tools to utilize.

Best of luck and keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I shall have a look at my mistakes but in the mean time please keep reading and reviewing - RC

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