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Review #1, by hopey110 Knowing

5th March 2017:
This story continues to pull my heart string so darn hard. I know for a fact I'm going to ball when you publish that last chapter. I can't believe it will all actually be over. Wow. All good things must end. I can't wait!

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Review #2, by Violet Potter 434 Knowing

25th February 2017:
honey, the box of tissues was already out
you seriously needed to say that at the beginning of the chapter
jokes-although I did tear up a bit

amazing chapter as per the norm

that last bit was sooo beautiful,
I mean, Id guessed what the charm was but I was not expecting the bit speechy bit-hence the tearing up of me

btw I know you love me, I'm fabulous
jokes but did you see what I did there?

anyways I'm expecting one exceptional ending chapter, which will most likely happen you being an outstanding writer-but if not; be warned I will find where you live

oh and that new story...
I need more by you, you can't close this without promising me a new one

so yeah, please , please, please make the last one perfect like normal for me

love you too!
from me xx

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Review #3, by jane Knowing

23rd February 2017:
aw :):):) this chapter was so cute

I love this story and I'm kinda sad for it to end, but I want to read how you end it :)

what was their ship name again? Bribus? Albelle? I don't remember if there was one :)

to sum it up this story is just everything I love. humor, fluff, and love :)

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Review #4, by blackzero Knowing

22nd February 2017:
I thought she was expecting.Never mind it was good to see your hero and herione confessed there undying love.Please when writing the last chapter do include what happens to everybody.Thank you for all your hardwork.God Bless Thanks.My Eyes are getring watery.

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Review #5, by AbraxanUnicorn Knowing

22nd February 2017:
Hurrah! I'm so glad to read another chapter of this story! I'm happy you found the time and motivation to continue it as it's one of my favourites on this site. I'll be very sad when you finish it :(

Such a cute chapter! Brielle's craziness is back with a vengeance :) I've missed her zany inner monologue!

And oh!! They love each other! At last! Sigh

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Review #6, by WizardsOnlyFools Library Discoveries

9th January 2017:
I feel like it should be impossible for Fred to be as dumb as he is and still be able to progress through school, haha. That being said, I love it anytime that dynamic duo brings out the dramatics.

It's true that this chapter was kind of filler-y, but it's clearly setting up some big reveal about the real meaning behind the Potter charm (still not entirely sure what it could be...), so it works as long as the last few aren't too far away! :P

As for an epilogue and follow-up story, yes please! I'd love to see more of your writing and what changes occur in James. Will he mature a bit more (hopefully not TOO much, as I said before, I enjoy the theatrics too much)? What career path will he follow? Will he stick close to his family/friends or will he drift apart? So many possibilities! I look forward to reading all about it.

Keep 'em coming! :D

Author's Response: Fred is a mystery to us all!

I just submitted a new chapter, sorry for the wait but it explains the charm!

Ah, thank you for being so supportive!!! I will be making an epilogue and hopefully another story.


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Review #7, by madness Library Discoveries

3rd January 2017:
Ahh thanks for the suspense haha

Author's Response: Thanks for the read! xx

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Review #8, by Strawberries202 Library Discoveries

1st January 2017:
Hmm... a bracelet? I wonder what that could be about? It honestly makes me curious, hence what you were probably going for. I bet it has some significant meaning behind it. Anyway back to what I was originally gonna say, What's going on with Brielle and Albus? I hope they actually get together soon! It's making me anxious!

But anyway thank you for making such a funny story! This is one of the funniest stories I have read in awhile. It still makes me wanna laugh every time!

Looking forward to what happens next! :)


Author's Response: Actually, a charm! She got a bracelet from all the Wotters for the holidays. Yes, you are right!! Don't worry - everything will be resolved soon :-)

Aw, thank you so much!


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Review #9, by Violet Potter 434 Library Discoveries

1st January 2017:
you know sometimes you're an utter genius-
sometimes being most times
for example you wrote this

and then you say something
and you turn soo sooo sooo stupid

I mean what the hell were you thinking when you asked if we wanted an epilogue


and then you make it worse by asking if we'd like another story with the same characters?!?!?

at this point i'm seriously considering how much brain you have left


or at least I do and I like to think i'm important enough to say this for the general amount of readers

if they believe otherwise-they're more stupid than you

incase you're having a not so clever moment-in the most polite way possible-
that's a yes to an epilogue aaannnddd another story

and because I've nearly written nearly 1000 characters and haven't actually mentioned this actual chapter I'm reviewing then I guess i'd better start...just as soon as

and that's as far as I got because I finished the first 1000... another I've just realised I kept going when I meant to stop sooo...

well as usual I LOVED this story and as you asked

the way I feel about this chapter is a feeling of great joy and happiness-shut up I don't care If they mean the same thing- it truly was an amazing chapter

special could be a good word

outstanding could be another

I have a few ideas about the whole charm thing-by the way I loved how you wrote james and fred- and what they're warning a certain him about

basically i'm either right or wrong I guess only time will tell...hopefully not too much time cause that would mean you haven't updated quick enough but yeah my subtle hinting is getting worse

also completely and utterly fine with you making this story fact could you be a complete sweetheart and make it 100or so chapters.

woudn't that be gorgeous?

I think it would be

anyways i have things to be talking to-including a lovely wall I found yesterday-really comfy to lean on

so I must leave this here for now
I apologise profusely

but it is what it is

and I apologise for not reading and reviewing this quicker-I saw the update either last night or this morning-I cant remember sorry time blurs-. but unfortunately i simply had to( i feel I've gone posh suddenly)...finish reading this other story which then turned out to be uncompleted with the writer out of sight, mind and time for 2 years-please never do this to me

anyways be the time I got to the end of an unfinished story this had gone from 3rd in the most recently updated to 22nd

just a useless fact I thought i'd waste your time with

anyways-gosh I say that a lot- I love this asper the usual
you should write more
just for me cause as we covered earlier,i'm a VIP

love from me xxx

ps. does this count as a "super long" review or should I work harder next time?

pps. you know sometimes I wonder how much these reviews annoy you-please rate on a scale of 1-29

ppps. yes I know that's annoying scale but deal with it we all know you love me

ps. I've just had a great idea
i'm gunna write a review one day for you in gobbledegook and make you translate it only for it to say utter rubbish:) :) :) :) :) :) :)

ps. okay i'm going now xxx

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I love this review so much.

You are literally amazing thank you for taking your time to write this all. Your review annoys me not at all, in fact it makes me smile!

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Review #10, by hopey110 Piecing it Together

24th December 2016:
I started reading this story my sophomore year of high school. I read all that was uploaded, extremely quickly. Laughing, sobbing, and just generally enjoying this amazing story. But then then the updates came less frequent.. And I read other fan fictions, died in high school (secretly wishing I was at hogwarts).

Invisible Theif was one of the very first next gen fan fictions I read! And it is still one of my favorite ones. Something is so down to earth about it. Bri is real, and I think that's what hit home for so many people.

Your story is 210,000 words that's only 40,000 less then Order of the Pheonix, which was the biggest book in the HP series. Be freaking proud. I would be!

I'm now half way done with my senior year of high school. I was scrolling through the Next Gen section on here, and your story popped up. 10,000 uber crazy emotions came into my body.

So I started from the beginning, and once again it's a story that has actually touched me. And now once again, I'm at the end, of what you have written.

The authors note at the end of your last chapter actually made me cry.. Please, stay inspired, finish this. Don't leave Bri, Albus, Dom, Amelia, Leslie, James, Fred, Louis, Scorpius, and Rose frozen in time, without an ending.

Everyone deserve an ending, no matter what it takes to get there.

To you, to us.. These people are real, and we need to know what happens.

Finish this for all us.

Thanks for inspiring me,

Hope, your Mega Uber Fan.

Author's Response: I just wanted to let you know that I was in such an writers block and reading your review really pulled me through to publish the next chapter of The Invisible Thief. I have been in such a rut with my writing and your kind words really warmed me.

I never thought about the length of my story - after reading your comparison I am so shocked. It really is crazy to think of it like that. Wow!

I really hope you are loving senior year. It is a great year - don't take anything for granted. I know high school can suck sometimes but just spend your time with the people you love and make you happy. Don't care about irrelevant people because in a few short months you'll be rid of them and you'll be able to start anew!

I will not leave OUR beloved characters frozen in time. I promise you that. They will receive their proper ending.

Thank YOU for inspiring me. Honestly.

With much love and I hope to hear from you soon


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Review #11, by WizardsOnlyFools Piecing it Together

19th November 2016:
A very entertaining chapter as per usual! REALLY glad it wasn't Mr. Rando, haha. A very interesting development. Perhaps a prelude to a REAL Bribus relationship?? :D

I'm confused though. Brielle said that she was now the only one of her friends not in relationship (loved the potato analogy, by the way). Was this an exaggeration on her part or am I missing something with Leslie and Fred?

And a Potter heirloom charm...? Kinda, maybe?

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! For sure a prelude to something with Brbus :-)

I'm glad you like the Potato analogy - I relate to it on all levels. It was an exaggeration - sorry boubt' that confusion! Y'know Brielle and her flare for dramatics.

I don't want to give anything away're getting warm...warmer...


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Review #12, by Violet Potter 434 Piecing it Together

16th November 2016:
hey this is gunna be a short review because I've got tone of revision to do before tomorrow

but yet again I loved you and the chapter as per the usual

I love how you write all the characters and all the humour and sarcasm you put in

lots of love

from me xxx

Author's Response: ahh, love seeing your penname showing up with such a sweet review!

i'm so glad you like everything!!

as always, with lots of love


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Review #13, by AbraxanUnicorn Piecing it Together

15th November 2016:
Yay for the return of Brielle! I totally love her :) I'm so glad Al has lots of respect for her and didn't take advantage of her when she was drunk.

Author's Response: We all can use a Albus in our lives!!

With lots of love


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Review #14, by WizardsOnlyFools Biscuit Birthdays

5th November 2016:
I just found this story a few days ago and I'm so glad you were able to reignite your inspiration to complete it. It really would have been a shame had you not returned to this fantastic story with all of its absolutely INSANE (and I mean that in the best possible way) characters.

Brielle is sooo completely and utterly crazy...and I absolutely love it! I love how she can go from cringingly awkward to proudly self-confident in a matter of seconds...while eating everything in sight. All of your characters are so entertaining, from the overly-dramatic and daft-headed boys to the frightening sass-masters, who are the girls. I kept on thinking that there was no way they could get any more ridiculous (at least, in a way that wasn't repetitive), but you gave me a constant supply of face-palms and laughter with their witty banter and outrageous situations.
I'm someone who enjoys a bunch of filler in stories, especially when the characters are so well written, so I didn't mind any of the chapters where the plot didn't advance. Also, maybe it's just because there wasn't much of it or maybe it's just because Brielle's quirky personality overshadowed it, but I was glad that the story (so far, at least) hasn't been very drama intensive. I don't mind a bit here and there, but some stories I've read sort of just drown in it after awhile, so I feel like yours has a great drama/light-hearted ratio. I feel like the Bribus relationship has progressed very naturally and all of the side stories like Dom's friendship and Amelia failing off the team fit nicely into the main plot.
I was disappointed after the New Year's party when it seemed like Brielle was just going to avoid everyone, but loved all of the little interactions with the Wotter's that made her see the truth. She can be spacey sometimes but she's too intelligent to continue ignoring plain old common sense. That chapter where she earned Dom's friendship back was particularly heartfelt and emotional, despite all of the death threats and jibes haha.

I'm glad to hear that you found a college that really suits you and where you can hone your writing skills. Like you, I'll love HP until the day I die, though I prefer to read rather than write, so it's been awesome reading your take on the continuing HP legacy! You do fans of the series proud and I look forward to any future stories you come up with, in addition to checking in for the closing chapters of this one. :)

Thanks for being an amazeballs writer!!!

Author's Response: It makes me so happy to know there are still current/new readers out here that are discovering stories everyday! I am really glad to get back to writing and have been missing it for awhile.

I am so glad you appreciated all of my wonky characters! Each of their personalities have kind of fallen in to their own as I've written this novel! I was always worried about my fluffy fillers not fitting in nicely with the actual plot and sometimes I felt like I was forgetting the plot but for a new reader to appreciate and feel like everything fits in well is so great to hear!

After the downfall of New Year's it was for sure harder to write without all of her friends with her which is why those interactions were so crucial!!

I am so happy to hear that! I am an avid reader as well and always looking for new novels to read so if you have any good recommendations let me know in the next chapter review!

Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to write such a thoughtful and meaningful review! Readers like you keep m e going!

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Review #15, by HarryGinnyLove88 Biscuit Birthdays

30th October 2016:
Well, what can i say is that i absolutely love this story. Its funny and awesome and i hope you write soon.
By the way how mzny chapters are left in this story??

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! The next chapter is waiting validation and there will be less then five more chapters to go depending on how I space it all!

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Review #16, by because i write Biscuit Birthdays

28th October 2016:
I literally sat down and read this in one sitting. It's funny, witty, unique, and entirely too easy to become enthralled by! I love your characters :)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! It means a lot to hear that from a new reader!

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Review #17, by AbraxanUnicorn Biscuit Birthdays

27th October 2016:
I found this story yesterday evening. I've been glued to it since. I LOVE Brielle and the dialogue is hilarious!! I've even overlooked spelling and grammatical errors (and I'm a pedant when it comes to those things) because the plot line has been so damn good!!
Looking forward to updates :)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh - I LOVE NEW READERS!!! I, of course, love my oldie dedicated readers but to see a new reader after writing this story for over a year is crazy to me I love it!!! My spelling and grammatical errors are going to be the death of me - hopefully, once I'm done I can go back and edit everything!

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Review #18, by The Justice League Biscuit Birthdays

26th October 2016:
So glad your back!! Great update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! So glad you're still here!

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Review #19, by Violet Potter 434 Biscuit Birthdays

26th October 2016:
how can you think we'd of abandoned you?

sure i wasnt there when you first started the story, but I like to think I've been here a while.
And unless the rest of her birthday includes everyone falling off a cliff and dying, please believe when I say I'm sticking around for good

this story is amazing, and too good to leave

and I'm kind of ashamed to say that I now need to get go back and edit part of my newest tory cause I realised how much of it is similar to yours
-apologies, I'll change it and then add a little note in case there's still parts you feel are too similar xxx

but this story is amazing as I was saying- I kinda proved it by wanting mine to be like yours-sorry again

its so funny, I love how sarcastic Brielle is- and how food centred

hope you manage to write more soon and that we maybe get another story ;)

*subtle hint*
*subtle hint*

love you and Brielle lots

Author's Response: Oh my gosh - I can't believe you're still here and reading! It makes me so happy to see a familiar name up there in the reviewing section!

So glad to hear that! I don't think anyone will be diving off cliffs in the near future as long as I'm the one behind the laptop writing hehe

Oh gosh, don't worry too much about that! I mean, they do say something that copying is flattery or something like that - right? As long as nothing is in ill intention or word for word copied then I really don't mind at all!

Never apologize!! I will have to check out your story and show it some love as you've done for mine!

I'm loving your subtle hints!! All I can say is that my writing will never come to an end so you expect some more wacky tales from me :-)


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Review #20, by AlexFan Puppy Dog Eyes

28th April 2016:
I have so many chapters to catch up on in your story because I haven't been keeping up in the fanfiction world lately. I didn't expect to come back to a chapter like this. That ending is wild (and I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter!)

I love Lily, that girls is so smart. I admire a person who knows exactly how to get their way, and the fact that she can cry on cue is pretty impressive as well, she should consider a career in acting.

Bri was so determined to stay away from Albus and all Lily had to do to convince Bri to see her brother was give her The Look. To be honest I don't know how Bri managed to get over there, a bad stench and an unclean room would've convinced me to stay even farther away than before.

Harlem shake is probably the most original way I've ever seen someone describe their heart beating like and yet I understand completely what you mean. BUT SERIOUSLY THAT ENDING THOUGH OH MY GOD I CANNOT BELIEVE ALBUS JUST SAID THAT AND BRI IS JUST THERE LIKE MCEXCUSE ME WHAT IS HAPPENING.

Author's Response: I, myself, have not been keeping up in the fanfiction world either. I'm planning on finishing this story within the next few months and was so happy to come back to a review like this!

Lily is a fun character to write. I really do love her tons. Very mischievous and calculating she is.

Bri is pretty tough but even tackling the sixth year boy's dormitory is a hard thing to do! She's strong

I always try to leave a good taste for the ending - i'm glad you liked it! My heart is always harlem shaking :-)

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Review #21, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins Hurts

10th January 2016:
*sniffle* I miss you. Come back. COME BACK!

Author's Response: I'm a horrible person and don't deserve someone as dedicated as you. I am back to finish this story (like I've said before) so please don't kill me. I love your dedication to this story and all your beautiful reviews you leave me

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Review #22, by harrypotterlover1234 Victory or Vicotire

16th December 2015:
Woah. The end of the chapter was a shocker😯😯 I.first thought it was Dominique in the office

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #23, by Cynthia Trusted You

16th December 2015:
THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESSOME. I k ow u have seen my review like a trillion times but I really love the story 😊😊

Author's Response: I hope to see your reviews a billion more times! Thank you so much for leaving a review!

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Review #24, by Cynthia It's Kind of Christmas

15th December 2015:
I love this story. I dont want it to end . This is like the first book I read with enough chapters for a strong reader like me

Author's Response: Ah, I'm so glad!

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Review #25, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins Hurts

10th December 2015:
XD Happy holidays!

Author's Response: happy holidays to you! :-)

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