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Review #1, by Iellwen Remembering.

31st August 2014:
Heya! I'm finally here for our Pit's August Review Exchange! :D

Wow, what a powerful first chapter! The guilt Rose will live with, whether Hugo survives the attack or not, will be quite the heavy burden and I'm very much looking forward to reading on! I love the idea of a Next-Gen kid not growing up in a perfectly peaceful and wonderful environment!
And the guilt Hermione will carry! She was 'too busy with paperwork' so delegated watching over Hugo to Rose; she 'chose' work over her kids and that's what happened...

Ack, that's a really messed up situation and I can't wait to read on. Will Hugo make it through? Will Rose overcome the trauma of 'failing' her younger sibling? Will Hermione overcome the horror of 'failing' her children and relying so much on her young daughter?
That's good drama right there! :D

Of course, no one is really at fault here; no one could have foreseen the attack, even with all the warnings and protection spells. They all felt safe and one tiny little mistake (if you can call not wanting to always play with your younger brother and wanting to spend a little time alone a 'mistake') escalated very quickly. I'm glad Rose isn't being held responsible (what kind of moronic adult would hold a child responsible for their short-comings, especially in such a situation?!) and I'm very much looking forward to read about her journey to recovery, if one may call it so. She will, after all, have to go through a thing or two and experience new perspectives to be able to let go of her guilt, to forgive herself...

Aah, I'm very much intrigued and I'm off to the next chapter ;)
Cheers!

*Gee

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Review #2, by LittleLionGirl Exhaustion

25th July 2013:
Another well written chapter. I am happy that her cousins care so much about Rose. I like knowing that her dad talked about Fred rather than hiding his memories away. I hope you continue with this!
XOXOOXXO,
LLG

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D They care a lot for her and worry about her.
I wanted to include Ron talking about Fred, I want to imagine that they would want to keep Fred's memory alive and let the children know how amazing he was. :D I will continue with this, don't worry. I have it all planned out, it's just getting time to write it.
XOXOXOXOXXOX


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Review #3, by LittleLionGirl Remembering.

25th July 2013:
This is an amazing start to a story and it shows what happens sometimes in real life (minus the werewolf) that children don't think about. What will happen to Hugo? It will be interesting to see how Dobby fits into the next gen story. I think the flow is nice and the tone is very fitting. I can feel Rose's retreat every time she talks about the incident.
XOXOXOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad that I got that across well, I wanted Rose to be like a normal kid and worry about what she wanted to do.
Hugo will be in the next few chapters, he got badly bitten. :(
Dobby will be soon, he helps out Rose. :D
Thank you so much for your kind and amazing words! :D You're so amazing!
XOXOXOXOXOXXOX


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Review #4, by heartjily4ever Exhaustion

22nd July 2013:
So hey, this is me with another of my reviews. I just want to say this is the sweetest, well not exactly sweetest plot but sweetest thoughts from Rose ever. It's so unusual as well, and I can't imagine how rose and dobby will meet but I am excited to see this.

Author's Response: HEY!! :D I love your reviews!
Aww I understand what you mean, poor Rose. She didn't mean to have that happen to Hugo.
She'll meet up with Dobby soon, I can't wait to see what you think of the rest of this story. :D


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