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Review #1, by magnolia_magic Paper

15th July 2013:
I am so glad this oneshot caught my eye! Normally I shy away from Voldemort fics (I'm not a sad-ending kind of person), but every now and then I'll stumble upon one that I love. This is definitely one of them! Your style is just beautiful, and I was engrossed in Natalie's story.

I'm glad you filled us in on her childhood, and what she and her mother went through. It makes her transformation much more believable. And her mother's death was even more heartbreaking because she was all Natalie had to come home to. And her relationship with Tom was so convoluted that I couldn't see any hope for a happy ending. It just broke my heart that Natalie was so starved for love that she would turn to the one person who could never give it to her.

Much of this story consists of Natalie recounting past events; we don't really get into the present until the very end. The one suggestion I have is to make some of this happen in the present, if that makes sense. Have Natalie tell about some of the events as they happen; it would help the story feel more immediate. But that's just a nit-picky thing...it didn't detract at all from my enjoyment of this!

I love that you brought the whole story full-circle with the last paragraph. It brings this deeply sad story to a very poetic, haunting end.

Awesome job!

--Maggie

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Review #2, by rogue_bludger Paper

29th April 2013:
that was beautifully written and sent shivers down my spine. LOVE!
~M

Author's Response: That was what i was aiming for :) Thanks for reading!

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Review #3, by Viikidaviking Paper

25th April 2013:
Woah...I though this was really rather amazing. I was interested to see what kind of story this was as the title didn't really give that much away, but I am really glad that I did decide to read this. This is a really peice of powerful writing and I though it was written in a really clever way. You are talented, no joke about that and you should seriously write more like this. This totally needs lots more of reviews and favorites because this is one of the best stories I have ever read on HPfanfiction! PLEASE write more of this so I can squee over it for the rest of my life. I need more of this.

-Viking xxx

Author's Response: Aaah thank you so much for the amazing review and favorite! That really means a lot to me! I'm so glad that you enojyed it so much as I certainly enjoyed writing it. YOU HAVE GIVEN ME SO MANY COMPLIMENTS! I don't diserve this much reciognition for this story, it's not that special...but ek I love you! Unfortunatly this was only planned to be a one-shot as I can't see where I can go from here. Sorry about that.

Thank you so mucH for reviewing!

-HuffleyPuff


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