1am sounds like a perfectly reasonable time to have dinner :D
He cooked at Hogwarts? That is so cool! I've never thought of anyone being able to do that there or being allowed to cook there.
I know they're not dating, but they act like they are and they're so cute together. I hope one day they'll officially date each other.
Yay! Louis is an artist :D Only Louis can be artistic it fits him so well :D
I hope he gets lots of clients, I would hire him if I needed an architect :D
See he does live there already! He just needs to officially move in, instead of being such a guy about his feelings :D
Who is Molly with that she needs to say the code name? And why does Frankie not like her?
Ooo it's Lucy, why does he hate her?
That is such a cool club to work at! I love how all your Louis's are obsessed with vampires :D He's such a cool and awesome character!
I love it so much that he works there, I really can't get over how pretty cool and awesome that is!
I really loved this chapter :D

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This Story along with the one with Ciaran are by far some of my favorites on here. I really hope you add more to this soon! :)

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I'd like to start by saying that I have a crush on Louis. Like when he opens to door in low-strung pajama bottoms. Heeyy there...

Now, ahem, important stuff.

I liked Frankie a lot in the opening of the chapter, and I think the beginning was very strong in terms of characterization and description - but I feel like after the first scene in his apartment, we don't really get much about him. I'm curious to get to know Frankie better.

After the first scene, I think the chapter could definitely benefit from some more description (maybe of Frankie's workplace or of the infamously gorgeous Healer Sean?)

The Frankie/Louis relationship is already very engaging, and I want to read more!
10/10
Faux

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Here I am with my review my lovely! :D
I love that he said he had a concussion but still went back to work, he really doesn't like sleep does he?
He seems like a bit of a clumsy person :D
I did think for a minute he wanted Louis haha but I wonder who this Sean is? And why Louis thinks that him and Frankie are dating when Frankie says that they're not?
Am I sad for getting excited that Chloe said the words 'silver linings' because it made me think of your other story? :D haha.
I do like that you've mentioned werewolf and veela genetics for Louis, I can see them being a tricky combination when together.
Oh Louis is sneaky kissing Frankie in front of Sean, very sneaky indeed!
I am liking this already! I can't wait for more :D
I'm so glad that I motivated you to finish this, so happy that this chapter is dedicated to me :D
Love love LOVE this! :D

Author's Response: Hey!

He's more indifferent to sleep, than just not liking it. He's an insomniac. But he wouldn't say no to a good night's sleep if he could... He can only get that in one place. ;)

He is a little clumsy. Not Tonks clumsy, but enough to have bumps and bruises every so often.

Him and Louis are an interesting couple, you'll find out more about them as the story goes. They're more... together than Frankie admits. ;)

Sean isn't going anywhere, even when he's only talked about. You'll find out more about him, too. For now, he's kind of a mystery. :P

I had to bring in the werewolf bits! It's always a part of Louis. :D He's very sneaky...

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.

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