OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO AWESOME!
I thought Ellie was pregnant lol :) I'm a seer...and no, I'm not related to Sybill Trelawney...
At first I had no idea what was going on, but then half way through, I thought something like this was going to happen haha :D
But I didn't think they were going to get married though! I just thought that Louis was going to propose!!! :D
When she got her eyes covered by the blindfold, I was like "Hmmm, this is very strange. Seems very Louis-like"
And turns out it was!
I'm so happy for them! ARGH!! SO CUTE! CUTE-NESS OVERLOAD! It's so adorable! I sort of feel like I was watching them grow up, and now they are finally married!
My little children (well, technically they are your's and J.K. Rowling's but still)... :'D T.T Tears of happiness!
Louis and Ellie make a really good team huh?
This was such a wonderful story and so was its prequel! I loved it so much! Love your writing and please make sure that you don't stop.
See you soon, m'darling!
iatevoldysnose xoxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it! ♥
Well, hello fellow seer. ;) I am related to Sybill actually. She's my fifth cousin thrice removed. :p
hehehe, a lot of people were pretty shocked for that! I debated making him propose but then that would have been too predictable ahaha. :p
The blindfold was a reference to Blossoming. It was about chapter three/four? :p That was basically the hint I was giving for you all. :p
ahaha, they do make a good team! :p
I'm so glad you liked it!
Don't worry, I won't be giving up writing for a long time! Lovely people like you make me never want to leave. ♥
Thank you so much for all your amazing reviews!
-Kayla. :) Report Review
Litterally 2 seconds after i read that you'd written a sequel to 'Blossoming', i rushed over here and stared reading.
This was SO good! I knew it! when Ellie made her try on the dress i knew something was up! But i didn't think it would be the wedding... i thought he was going to propose!! So a nice surprise! Gosh i love all of them so much. Great way to end the story. and ELLIE IS PREGNANT!!! YAY! I'm so happy! Seriously, thanks to you i've had a great few hours!
Thanks so much for not stopping your story there and finishing with a quirky and unconventional wedding... it was perfect.
Thanks again, both the stories are going into my favorites :)
slightlyobsessedwithfanfictionAuthor's Response: ahaha I'm glad you liked it! :D
You're FAR too kind, thank you so much! ♥
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That was good, but it was lind of hard to follow. i got the feeling that you made it up while you were writingAuthor's Response: Thanks! :)
Well, I had a basic plan of it and I just followed that through. If you read Blossoming, it was very similar. It's a fic that was purely meant to be filled with fluff and humour. :p
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Darling ... that was not cheesy at all. Well ... maybe ... but it was really sweet! I love the way Ellie arranged that all without telling Phoebe. I wish I had a friend like Ellie - but not a hormonal pregnant one. A crazy one. Wait - I've already got two of those.
OMG. If you did a sequel of this sequel, about Bee and Louis after their marriage, I think I'd cry because I'd be so happy. (I think I said this about Blossoming, didn't I?)
But anyway, this was really cute and fluffy - and I love the way Jack got fat :)
Summer xxAuthor's Response: ahaha I think it was quite cheesy, but I loved writing it! :D
I'm the Ellie of my group ahahaha (well, aside from being pregnant and being in a relationship :p)
I don't think I'm going to do a sequel of this. But you never know, I might if I ever get inspiration... :p
hehehe I just imagined Jack to be a little fatty. :p
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I DON'T HAVE VOWELS! Haha. That was hilarious (and cute and fluffy). My cheeks hurt from smiling.Author's Response: ahaha thanks! Now that I'm looking at your review I realised I wrote the wrong 'vowels'! It should be 'vows'! ahahah so thanks for that? :p
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! :D
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Ahem. . . .hello there!
You may remember entering this in 'The Sequel Challenge' eons ago, and being promised a review. . .well this is the (very late) review!
I am so sorry it took so long! Apologies!
Aaaanyway, onto this!
The beginning is relatively normal, you know, two girls going getting mani-pedi's, very run-of-the-mill stuff, then Ellie announces there is a party, and my curiosity is aroused.
Why is Ellie holding a party? Don't people usually invite people beforehand, instead of just announcing 'I'm throwing a party, see you there!'
But nonetheless, I went along with it.
I knew something was up when they went to get their hair done. I mean, I know Ellie and Phoebe are best friends, but still, people make arrangements when they do stuff like this!
I was still clueless when they blindfolded her, but as I said above, I went along with it. I was completely oblivious as to what was going on, until she mentions the dress was long and heavy. And then:
OH MY GOOD GOD! SHE'S GETTING MARRIED!
After that, came a lot of screamin and flapping of hands. So now my neighbours thinks I'm crazy. . . .
Anyway! This was brilliant! 10/10 for mystery and sequel-ness! :D
And again, sorry it took so long!Author's Response: Hello! Don't worry about the lateness, there was never any rush. :)
(Also, I apologise for my slow response - real life is mean sometimes).
Ellie's a bit of a wacko, literally. She is the signature crazy friend that we all have. :p
Phoebe has known her for ~thirteen years, she just goes with it by now. ;)
ahahaha the blindfolding is a reference to Blossoming! I don't know if you ended up reading it, but in one chapter Louis blindfolds Phoebe, so that was a small sneaky hint that Louis was up to something again. :'D
ahahahahaha I'm SO glad it came as a shock, I don't think anyone actually guessed what was going to happen ahaha. :p
I flap my hands all the time when I'm excited, my family just rolls with it now. My neighbours never leave the house so they probably wouldn't see me if I did cartwheels in a nun outfit (not that I do, it's nearly midnight and it's been a long week) and this has just turned into a bit of random mush now.
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oh my gawsh, I've been anticipating for this ever since you've mentioned a little heads up for a sequel. This was perfect!
And Ellie. I like the way she thinks. And makes surprises. Wow, a wedding organized that Phoebe didn't even know about! That sort of surprised me.
And I'm so happy that Phoebe and Louis are together. I know that they would eventually marry, from where Blossoming left off, but I was pleased when I found out there was a sequel to it. It confirmed my wishes for the couple, and its so nice that there was a rather twisty, unusual way they wedded. I loved the idea of it!
Thank you so much for writing the sequel! It made me so happy, Kayla. It was a lovely read!Author's Response: PEARL!
aww, I'm glad you liked it. :')
Ellie is a bit loopy (just like me), but she's loveable. :p
Yeah, they're canon. ;) They just couldn't NOT get married. :p
I'm glad you liked it! And your welcome for writing the sequel, so many people asked for one! :D
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After reading Blossoming I felt in love with Louis haha, he's just too sweet and crazy and perfect! So I was really happy when I saw this :)
It went so fast, at the beginning I thought Phoebe was having a dream or something, because it was a bit too crazy, but then I remembered he's Louis and he's more than a bit crazy :) I really liked it, Louis can't be more sweet or spontaneous than that and a surprise wedding is just perfect for them.
And I loved the stressed hairdressers, I don't know why, but the fact that one of them was called Ernesto made me giggle. Though was Ellie really pregnant or was it just a cover for Phoebe's wedding?Author's Response: I fell a little bit in love with him as well, he's basically my dream guy. :p (Stalkerish tendencies included!)
I'm glad you were happy to see this. :p I was hoping people would like this. :D
ahahaha it did happen fast but that was like the whole of Blossoming. :p Louis is a bit crazy, he had to do the whole spontaneity thing because that was just THEM. :p
Ernesto came from Just Go With It. :p You know when he's criticising Jennifer Aniston's hair and he's all like, 'NEGLECT!"? :p
Well if you haven't seen the movie, you definitely should! It's one of my favourites ahaha. :p
Ellie really was pregnant, it just served to be a better reason to why Phoebe had to be dragged around. :p
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This may be the coolest wedding ever. I could just picture Louis shouting "She said yes" in the most funny and adorable way. Thanks for posting this :)Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D
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AGH! THIS WAS SO CUTE AND FLUFFY AND I COULDN'T STOP SMILING THROUGH ALL OF IT AND LOUIS. LOUIS!!! ARGHH!!! YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER AND I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE LOUIS AND HE IS SO SWEET AND BEE IS SUCH A LUCKY GIRL AND THIS IS SO MUCH LIKE THEM.
ARGH! Anyway, well, I hope that you've gathered from my very unexpected outburst above that I loved it. A LOT. And I just loved it okay, and it was perfect and IT WAS JUST PERFECT. Okay? Good.
It was just beautiful. And I may have squealed a lot. But I loved it.
- AbhiAuthor's Response: ABHI.
I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT I WAS SQUEEING AS WELL BECAUSE THEY'RE SO ADORABLE AND CUTE TOGETHER. :'D
I'm so glad you liked it, I was so nervous people wouldn't like it as much as they liked Blossoming! :D
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