Just wanted to say that your fanfic is really good and I hope you upload the next one soon:))Author's Response: :D thanks. It means a lot. I should be uploading soon. Keep reading. Report Review
Reminds me of euro trip- might want to mention that in the credits.. Other than that, it's a great story, but the chapters are too short and with very little plot- a regular chapter is usually around 5000 words with a main event occurring / filler chapter for details. You currently have 2 chapters, 1500 words each- that's hardly one chapter.
I recommend you to put more details in the chapter, think about the direction of the story and where you want your characters to be (plot-wise) by the end of the chapter.
Anyway, your story is great and I really want to see what happens next:)Author's Response: Thanks for the advice and I am very glad you are enjoying it. Tbh I have no idea what euro trip is.
I didn't want to write a lot for the first couple chapters, cos in my mind I still haven't figured the direction I want the story to go. Having said that, the next chapter will be much longer and the plot will be revealed. So stick around...
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Looking good so far, update soon can't wait for the rest of it.Author's Response: Cheers, I appreciate your review.
Stick around. There's a lot more to come.
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