SO SAD!! :`( Seriously though, it was very well-written, and just long enough. I love Fred and George, and it was nice to see Fred helping George, even posthumously. But not post-humour-ously! Okay, that was a bad joke. But it fits!Author's Response: Hello!
I like your joke! It's fitting in an inappropriate sort of way (just the type George and Fred would have liked!) Thanks for the lovely review! I'm glad you think it's well written. I always have my insecurities about my ability to write in English.
Thanks again! :) Report Review
This was very sad, but also very good. I like the fact that you've written it TO George rather than about him, because it made it more interesting. I also really liked the fact that Fred could help him, even from 'the other side'. I imagine George, Ginny and Molly being the ones who took Fred's death the hardest, so it was kind of nice to see them seek comfort with each other.
It was really well written and you should be very happy with it :) I mean, the chapter is pretty short, which I normally would remark about, but in this case I thought it was the perfect length. A lot of emotion without any babbling - just perfect! :)Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for the lovely review, you have no idea how much your words mean to me. I was very nervous about this, as it is my first attempt at a grief!fic. I love Fred and George and I haven't written them before because I thought I wouldn't be able to give them justice. I'm glad that my characterisation wasn't terribly bad.
I imagine Molly, Ginny and George taking it the hardest too. (Well, clearly.) I've always thought that Ginny was very close with the twins and I think she'd be the one to help George get back to being.. well, George.
I'm glad you think it's well written. English is not my native language and I always have my doubts about this and that. I'm the queen of short chapters, unfortunately. Whenever I try to make them long, they always tend to end up really bad. A lot of paragraphs of nonsense with no relevance.
Anyway, thanks again!!! Report Review
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