I'm really enjoying this story. My father is a lawyer and I have witnessed several cases in court (and listened to countless, usually boring stories) so I can say you portraying them accurately.
My one criticism (and I promise I'm trying to be constructive) is that you are moving too fast. Adding slightly more detail so you get more attached to a certain plot line or scene would, I think, be beneficial. Also, along those lines maybe think about adding some more character development. I feel like I'm slowly getting to know James and Layna but i would love to get to know some of the other characters (such as Scorpius, though I'm sure that will come) lastly, you should consider changing the POV at some point. I'm personally a huge fan if when authors do this.
Overall this is a very well written story with a good plot, so good Job to you. I look forward to continue reading! Report Review
It's really good so far! Keep posting!Author's Response: Thanks! I just put up Chapter 5 recently and I'm working on Chapter 7 right now! Let me know what you think! :) Report Review
DID NOT DISSAPPOINT! I think you would Love this fanfic called No Ordinary Nutter and Memoirs of a Nutter! Continue WRITINGGG!!Author's Response: I'll definitely be sure to check them out! I'm working on a couple more chapters of this story and I'm thinking of starting another one soon. It's actually my first story so I'm really happy I'm getting such positive feedback! :) Report Review
Amaing chapter! i LOVE the Main Character!
IM excited!!!Author's Response: Thanks! I've completed a couple more chapters so let me know what you think! If you really like it, let others know about it too! I really enjoy your positive attitude! Thanks so much! :) Report Review
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