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Review #1, by Pretense Of Perfection Villain

10th July 2014:
I really love e the batman qI uote you chose to go with this, I think it works quite well with your one-shot, and is beautiful in itself. It manages to capture Draco's character in this story so completely. I really like the twist you had in the end, it was quite a surprise, I think Draco may have been a little bit unlike himself...we know from canon that he does care for and respect his parents despite everything, so I can't imagine what would ever change that. Hermione was done well, even though she had a very short part, and her death was very emotional. I have the sense that it's all somehow Draco's fault, but I'm not entirely sure. The story reads a little rushed and fragmented, especially at the end, but I think most of that was intentional to create an air of mystery and intrigue. Draco's feelings for Hermione are quite clear though, despite everything, and his pain is expressed very well.

--house cup 2014 review--
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Review #2, by Nymphadorah Villain

6th February 2013:
this is it??? write more of it please!!!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I wrote it originally as a challenge for the every word counts classic. I am, however, thinking of making it into a prologue for a longer work! :)

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