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Review #1, by Erynn Ladies day out

21st May 2013:
your an amazing writer please hurry and make more

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Review #2, by SlightObsession Ladies day out

20th May 2013:
i was the only one? *mouthhangsopenandblushes* woahh!
wow, just, there dresses, (if i imagined them correctly) are amazing, so beautiful! I cant wait to see the boys reaction to the dresses!
Cant wait to find out what animal it is either!

No faults in this one! Brilliant chapter! cant wait for the next one! xx

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Review #3, by Harveyboy Ladies day out

20th May 2013:
Loved the descriptions of the dresses, they sound lovely...can't remember whether Draco knows about his new. Brother or sister I will have to read back a few. Chapters...anyway great chapter as usual 11/10

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Review #4, by acester86 Seeking and Finding.

19th May 2013:
I'm glad i finally found someone who knows what 17+ means, though that was still quite shy of adult material in my opinion pg13 at best. but a lot closer than any other story i have read on here that was maked 17+. a very good read though, thank you for writing, can't wait to read some more.

Author's Response: Loool. Only problem is I got rejected for my dark fan fic because of references were too explicit, so because there's more than likely greater things to come, I have to keep it tame right now thanks for your review :)

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Review #5, by Erynn Second day in My Flat

17th May 2013:
THIS IS SOOO GOOD PLEASE WRITE MORE

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Review #6, by Erynn Second day in My Flat

16th May 2013:
wow please write more this is amazing !!

Author's Response: The next chapter is up and awaiting validation I promise you this :)

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Review #7, by megthechef43 Seeking and Finding.

16th May 2013:
Serene chapter with a lot action happening in a slow and building way. Selflessly Draco was finally able to help Hermione start the healing process. Showing his true feelings for her without the complication that has been troubling them in the past was nice to read. Strong ending to the chapter in that they both are able to find a compromise that suits them and their relationship and I could see the growth in them as a couple. Support was the only thing Hermione really needed to help her move on and heal. So, I'll be reading on when you update next. Seriously well thought out chapter and I really liked the story on elizabeth's house.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :). I'm putting up the next chapter today so I hope you enjoy that too :)

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Review #8, by ChloeMalfoy96 Second day in My Flat

16th May 2013:
More, more, more please more! I love this story more than any I've read. Please could you read mine? It's called the Slytherin Prince and the Gryffindor Princess. Also if you do read it could you please give me a review? I'd really appreciate it.
Keep up the amazing work. Every chapter is so vivid and enticing that I can actually see the characters and scenery like I'm really there.
Thank you for giving all your readers the pleasure of seeing this.

X ChloeMalfoy96

Author's Response: Ahh thank you :D and I will definitely have a read and leave a review, and I'm glad my chapters can do that, its a brilliant feeling :D

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Review #9, by SlightObsession Second day in My Flat

15th May 2013:
ERM, WELL, i dont know.a chipmunk? squirrel? they dont growl...erm. A lion? no, they dont have a bushy tail. A panther? A hairy panther? A wolf? A cheetah? I REALLY WANA GET IT RIGHT! erm...a persian cat? ahh hippogirff! Good chapter btw ;) loved it! xx

Author's Response: YOU'VE GUESSED IT... (and hippogriffs have beaks ;) ) but I cant say what it is until I reveal it :) I shall mention you when I do the next chapter on the animagus probably 2 chapters from now :) well done and im glad you liked it ! xx

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Review #10, by alix waddington Second day in My Flat

14th May 2013:
i have only just read this story and im loving and i am currently desperate for the next chapter this story is amazing :-D

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Review #11, by jmv555 Second day in My Flat

14th May 2013:
How dare you leave a cliffhanger haha. Good chapter, although I'm absolutely DYING to know what's holding Hermione back from going all the way with Draco. Frustrating but keeping me on the edge of my seat xx

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Review #12, by iona deady Second day in My Flat

14th May 2013:
I love you , you make such good books

Author's Response: ahha thank you :D x

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Review #13, by HPismygodson Second day in My Flat

14th May 2013:
A lynx maybe or a cougar

Author's Response: Close one, but she is not either :) x

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Review #14, by Harveyboy Second day in My Flat

14th May 2013:
I love your fill in chapters, the part with ginny just showed what great friends they are...you are a great story teller. I am not very good at guessing games...hermiones animagus? The only animal with a bushy tail like what you describe could be a squirrel but I'm not sure they growl...anyways that's my guess...hang on read the ending again...want to change my guess...is hermiones animagus a horse? No they don't growl either...I give up have to wait till next chapter...love your cliffhanger really do...

Author's Response: It's just going to take a while to figure out where to take the next chapter, and unfortunately i'm not revealing her animagus for a while, all in keeping with the mystery of things ;) it will be revealed eventually though :)

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Review #15, by iona deady Seeking and Finding.

13th May 2013:
When is next part out ,I need more

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Review #16, by jmv555 Seeking and Finding.

12th May 2013:
What I don't even know what just happened not registering HERMIONE Y U SO FRUSTRATING URGH

Author's Response: on the bright side, they are back together now :) and plenty more dramione on the way. well its nothing but that from here on I think :) x

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Review #17, by iona deady Seeking and Finding.

11th May 2013:
Ndjdiuedfhfuvhf that's all I have to say

Author's Response: Is that a good response then? :D I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and I hope you enjoy the next one too, thanks :) xx

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Review #18, by Harveyboy Seeking and Finding.

11th May 2013:
One of your best chapters I think...it was full of emotion, mystery and lots of dramione...well done...I will read your other story and review...by the way I think Elizabeth's charector is great, so intriguing and magical...

Author's Response: Thank you :) and next chapter should be up in a day or two, but unfortunately Elizabeth will probably not appear for a while, but I like her too much to scratch her out completely. Glad you enjoyed it :)

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Review #19, by SlightObsession Seeking and Finding.

11th May 2013:
Hi! This chapter is brilliant, cant wait for the next one! Couldnt find any flaws in this!
You should carry the darker one on! i would sure read it!
Until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Next one should be up in a day or so as its already written :D! I hope you enjoy the next chapter even though it's not a direct part of the story :)

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Review #20, by Harveyboy Hiding

9th May 2013:
So glad I found your update...I had really missed your story. Love the twist you have put in and the elves names are interesting. I agree Draco should search for hermione and I predict a very happy ending. I hope I am right...

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Review #21, by Celest Hiding

6th May 2013:
Please please please please, update. Please?

Author's Response: I'm going to be posting the next chapter as soon as my one shot goes up. that should be up in 2 days. then ill post the next chapter :)

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Review #22, by jmv555 Hiding

4th May 2013:
AMAZINGG!! I had so many Dramione feels because I know they're gonna be okay (hopefully) :) Wonderful chappy

Author's Response: As always you bring a smile to my face :D thank you for your review!! and next chapter should set your dramione feels tingling ;) (I hope) xx

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Review #23, by SlightObsession Hiding

4th May 2013:
This is a really sad chapter :( When Draco said he loved here, i was like 'yay' and did a little jiggly dance, and then she way like 'youre lying' and i just bummed out, but im looking forward to the next chapter. Didnt see any flaws in this one,
untill next chapter! x
SlightObession x

Author's Response: I do the little dance all the tim lol, my parents think im mad :p I do hope the next chapter (which im validating as soon as my random one shot comes through) will bring back the happy dance! im glad you enjoyed the chapter though and im glad you didn't see any flaws in it :D xx

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Review #24, by themadhatter The Wedding

2nd May 2013:
I am really loving this so far, the ups and downs are just what I expect from a relationship like Draco and Hermione's. I found that you described depression and it's stupor effects rather well and I do hope you weren't writing from experience. I can't wait for more chapters and seriously can't wait till Hermione comes to terms with her love too. You have a great writing style and I have loved seeing it develop and mature through the chapters. Yours is one of my true favorites. Keep Writing!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying my story. The next chapter is waiting validation and I'm writing chapter 18 now. I'm not writing from experience, just kind of guessing at how it would be for her. And don't worry they will get back together fairly soon. I'm a Dramione fan and I suck at writing long term separations ;)

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Review #25, by lifyndra What in the name of Merlin?

30th April 2013:
Bwaha! Poor Draco, so uncomfortable with Hermione innocently snuggling into his lap. I like the touch of Shakespeare... and it almost sounds like Hermione's developing some sort of split personality to deal with her distress, the way she keeps going in and out of awareness...

Author's Response: I'll respond to all your reviews on previous chapters in one. I didn't want Harry to help, I felt she needed to come away from the Weasleys and Harry for the story to happen...
I wanted the Slytherins and Gryffindors to make friends and be grown up's so that's how Blaise and Harry came about. I feel like of all of them Draco would understand somehow and Hermione will get better with his help, but not before the ups and downs and twists and turns. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :) xx


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