I love it! It's really cute and the characters are great! Please update soon! Report Review
I'M COMMENTING! I'M COMMENTING! HURRAY FOR ME! HAHA. sorry :)
I just started reading your story today so that explains why i'm only commenting now... but i am... so i am awesome... i know, i know... No you don't nee to bow!
Haha.. sorry... seems your first commenter is SLIGHTLY nuts, oh well.
Well good news... I LOVE YOUR STORY! yay!! no seriousy, this is really good! I love Avery! She's really great. i love how she's so naturally talented at magic.
I like that you made her religious. I'm not myself religious but it was a really original idea, i don't think i've ever read a fanfic where the main character is religious. So good job!!!
I love her relationship with the Wotters. They're all funny. I like how you've protrayed "Cat lady/ woman". Your story is really funny. And me like funny. :D
I have to say though, even though Aves seems to have a good relationship with her dad. it seems kind of twisted no? The whole thing like what she wasn't this beautiful for free... kind of harsh for a father no? But anyway... i loved in chapter 1 when he came home and just looked at her with so much pride when he learned whe was a witch. That was really sweet to read.
Ok, further on my friend we shall ride! (is that even a saying? i know. i'm kind of weird... i'm pretty sure i fell on my head a few times when i was younger... who am i kidding??? i fall on my head still today! explains a lot.) wow... that was a long parenthesis. ok . this is awkward. I LIKE CHOCOLATE... i don't really know why i wrote that but i thought you had a right to know.
Ok... well it feels kind of like i'm writing an essay here, but i'm sure it's very interesting to read since i'm such a fascinating person (note the NOT sarcasm :D)
I apologize that your first commenter had to be a nut case...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. by the way, i added your story to my favorites. i know, i know... i rock! No, you don't need to bow . wow... DEJA VU much???
OK. STOP. I AM UNSTOPPABLE!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA. OK . SERIOUSLY NOW. I'LL STOP.
(a completely sane fan :P) Report Review
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