I admit, this wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. I
don't like Twilight but your writing isn't as stilted as
the original (which may be in part due to the
protagonist of the main story) and the plot seems
interesting.

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Hmmm... as a rule, I hardly ever read crossovers. I don't like them, generally. I usually don't like AU's either, but I thought I'd give this a chance because you're a great writer. :D

But so far, I'm enjoying this. :D

The only thing that I don't like about this is the nicknames. But that's just my personal opinion. :p I generally don't like nicknames in any story. So feel free to ignore me ahaha.

Anyway, I really liked this! I'll be watching it... >:)

(Also, I really like this banner - it's so pretty!)

(And I'm the number one review WOOOP!)

:D

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad that you're enjoying this so far. I don't like AU's either most of the time, but I thought I'd just give it a shot, just for kicks. And Twilight...I wanted to try crossing it over with it too. It's sort of an experimental project thing that I was so desperate to toy with. Unfortunately it'll be a slow process, but the second chapter is halfway complete. Now I just need time to write the other half, edit and post...which might take forever.

And nicknames. I'll try to lighten my use for them, because personally, whenever I type a nickname down, I feel like I'm adressing to a whole new different character. But I will use it whenever, let's say Emmet jokes around, because from what I can faintly recall in cannon he's quite obnoxious.

Thank you so much for the reviews, dearie. They really do make my day, and they're always so sweet! :)




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