PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
-pleading with all her heart (MG) Report Review
I LOVE IT! Please continue Report Review
It's really good!! Please continue!! xx Report Review
I keep checking every day for any update...pleasee...I need it ASAP!! Report Review
What am I doing reading this story? Good question.
*cough* okay, well I wanted to say that this is a very intriguing start, and I'm excited to see where it goes :D
I generally don't read pregnancy stories, but your writing of them really has me interested. The characters have already got my sympathies :P
You're very talented, keep up the good work :D
soapman333 (Jack)Author's Response: Haha I don't know, why ARE your reading this story? It was just a plot bunny I couldn't get rid of! You can rest assured though that this one wont be about pregnancy at all, since the next chapter will probably take place well into the future :D Thank you so much, I always love your reviews x Report Review
I like the prologue. Update soonAuthor's Response: I'll try and update as soon as I can :) Report Review
Niceee please update soon thank youAuthor's Response: I'm trying my best to get the next chapter written! Thank you for reviewing x Report Review
Sorry, I get a bit patriotic! Hahaha.
Anyway, back to the review - I love Rose and Scorpius as a couple. They're so cute and like a hahahah to Ron because he hates the Malfoy's so much and there's nothing like rebelling against your father. I think this is a great start and you've described a drunken teenage encounter brilliantly. I'm intrigued to see what you're going to do with the rest of the story. Is Scorpius going to know about her 'secret'? Is anyone? Why does she keep it a secret?. loads of questions, therefore I will be favouriting to return and find out the answers :)
P.s sorry for the rambling, I'm a bit sleep deprived, resulting in a weird mood. Sorry!Author's Response: Please don't apologise for rambling, I loved this review! Thank you so much for the feedback :D I promise I'll try and update soon, I'm sorry it's taking so long D: x Report Review
OH MY GOD YAY!
Love Scorose, Love your writing and Love you!
I really like this so far and the build up that it leads to the rest of the story. I'm intigued as why Rose keeps it a huge secret and why she leaves home.
Deffo adding it to my favourites :D
Soph xxxAuthor's Response: Yay! I actually love you so much :D Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
i really like it!!! Keep going and dont let me wait too
long ;)Author's Response: I'll try and update soon! Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
That was a wonderful lead in for your story. I enjoyed it very much.Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate that :) x Report Review
this first chapter seems very interesting because it's showing how everything will change from the start. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter and when (and if) their baby is born in the next chapter, if it will have red hair or Scorpius' blond hair so that the Weasleys figure out who's the father! can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait and see! Thank you for your review (: Report Review
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