JAMES SIRIUS POTTER! WHO IN THE NAME OF MERLIN DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW JUST UUUGH!!! Freddie you are amazing as always, and Hope, you GO girl!
I've missed this :') Thanks so much for the upload, this story is so perf...I can't even...omg xoxo Report Review
So I'm a 6'1" varsity lacrosse player with a closet Harry potter obsession and I just wanted you to know I made a really unmanly noise when I saw you updated. Thanks for keeping me in touch with my feminine side hahaAuthor's Response: Well, I'm a 5'4" vocal music kid with an outrageously open Harry Potter obsession, and I just wanted you to know I died a lot when I read your review. Thanks for keeping me in touch with my "let's be egotistical about my writing" side. ;) Report Review
I love this story! I hope you're planning on making Dorothy and Freddie get together because I really want that to happen! and I've been waiting so long for the next chapter so please write another one! :)Author's Response: Well.you'll just have to wait and see, huh? ;) I'm glad you like the story, I'll be updating soon! (Hopefully.) Report Review
This is a great story...so addicting...and I love this chapter...BUT I WANT MORE!!! :) Keep writing, love. You are really good.Author's Response: What a victory. :) This is a very pleasing review...I'm so glad you like it! I'll be out of town for a few days, but as soon as I'm back, I'll try to put the next chapter in the queue. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
So before i start i have to say, I NEVER "ship" Freddie over James, actually I don't think I have ever actually read another story where that is an option, but point is I usually love James character, even when he is a jerk. Usually i will choose him over anyone else, yet this story has now become my favorite exception. Freddie and Thee are absolutely adorable. The perfect best friends turned couple (if that happens *hint* *hint*)
That being said the James explanation was good, I really started to kind of like James and then he had to completely ruin all of that with his "Jen is my number one" crap. Poor Thee, but she really needs to get over him. I agree with hope in that she needs to stop making excuses for him.
Anyways, enough of my ramblings. This story is great, quickly becoming one of my new favorites. Please keep writing!Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I could open you up to a new shipping experience! :) I always felt like the people favored the Potters, so it's kind of fun to show a different kind of jerk, you know? I'm glad you enjoy the story, and I'm super excited you used the word "favorite" :D Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Wow! I'm so happy that you've been updating again:) I'm a relatively silent reader but since you asked so nicely:)
I realy liked getting some incite into James and Dorthys relationship
I miss Freddie thoughAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you decided to review. it means a lot. :) I'm glad you liked seeing the relationship, and no worries, Freddie will be back soon. Thanks for reading (even if it is silent) and the review! Report Review
Wow James is a total manipulative asshole and Dorothy is pathetic. He was so using her and he knew it too, and then tried to spin it like it was all her fault for not just accepting it. In their little discussion about whether it was okay to do this or not, he acted like he was seriously interested in Dorothy and wanted to continue this to see if he had real feelings for her, and did not make it clear that he would drop her as soon as Jen wanted him back. I really hope that he comes crawling back to Dorothy and she rejects him as he treated her like crap and has no regard for her feelings at all. And the fact that he kept cheating on Jen with her should be a sign to Dorothy that James is selfish and pathetic. I really love Freddie but think he is way too good and nice for Dorothy as she is totally emotionally dysfunctional and I wouldn't trust her to be in a healthy, normal relationship unless she makes some serious changes. I cannot believe she keeps making excuses for James and won't just admit that he is not at all a real friend to her and doesn't care about her at all other than someone to use to stroke his own ego and get off with. At this point, I hope Dorothy rejects James and Fred finds someone else who can fully appreciate him.Author's Response: Um. Wow. I'm glad the chapter sparked so much emotion. Have you ever had someone in your life that you just couldn't say no to? That you could never stay mad at, or you always made excuses for? James is that person for Dorothy. It's like, she knows she shouldn't go back, but it's James. Like, there's no logical reasoning behind it. I hope you still keep reading even if the characters drive you nutty, thank you so much for your honesty and the review. :) Report Review
This gave me real insight into James and Dorothy's relationship, so thanks a lot for writing it :) To be honest with you, it didn't really make my opinion of James any better, I still adore him, but, ugh, I dunno... I liked the Leaky Cauldron scene though, it was cute :) It felt like three friends together joking around like it should be really. Right now, I'm just dying for some Fred Weasley *wink wink giggles girlishly*
The chapter is excellently written as usual ;) Can I ask for a favour? Could you possibly take a look at my three stories? It would be really great to get such an amazing author's opinion on them
Adore you forever more xoxo
1000/1000Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was so sure that people were going to end up hating Dorothy or James or both.ugh. I don't know. And don't worry, Freddie will be back soon :) And yes, I will definitely check out your stuff! I'm flattered that you think so highly of my writing. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
FINALLY! haha i dont have much to say really just glad you got around to posting a new chapter(:Author's Response: SORRY! :D I'm glad I could make you happy, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
FREDDIE I LOVE YOU, SUCH A GENTLEMAN INSISTING YOU PAY! *swoon* heheh I adore you, it is official, I don't know what I would do without this story to keep me going. xoxoxAuthor's Response: I love reading your reviews. You stroke my ego, and I appreciate that SOOO much. :D I adore you as well!!! Chapter 8 will be placed in the queue right after I finish typing this response. Report Review
This story is too perfect!! I love your characterization of Dorothy and her relationship with Freddie and James... my heart goes out to Freddie, he is so cute (in a manly way)! :D
I can't wait to see what you do next, update soon :)Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I'll be putting chapter 8 in the queue tonight! Report Review
Plz, plz add a new chapter :'(
~MacyAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it! We're currently just waiting for the site to validate Chapter 7. It'll be up before you know it. :) Report Review
Hey l like how you laid a foundation for the story to start (sorry I'm really bad at describing)
~MacyAuthor's Response: Thank you, and I promise, it is quite alright. :) Report Review
I love this story to bloody pieces. It's the best next Gen one that I've read in aaages! I actually bothered to review, so that's saying something ;)
This story is really well written, the plot's really interesting, I don't hate James, he annoys my but I still like him most of the time, BUT, I adore Fred to bits, he's just supermegafoxyawesomehot. Basically, thanks to you, I have developed a fetish for Fred Weasley. ;)
Keep on writing, I loved the girls night, and I wonder what's going on with Tabitha, can't wait for the next chappy!
1000/1000 xxAuthor's Response: You have no idea how happy I am to hear that you don't hate James. Like seriously, I am so happy. One of my main goals was to make every "bad guy" likeable. SO THANK YOU SO MUCH. :D And the Fred Weasley fetish? Heh...anytime. ;) I'm so glad you liked it and bothered to review! Report Review
This is just too amazing for words. I've never seen a Fred/OC story look so amazing. I really want to go into depth about my deep fangirly feelings of love for this story but words seem to have failed me. Which is a good thing, since I rarely have nothing to say. SUPERMEGAFOXYAWESOMEHOT IS THE ONLY WORD THAT CAN TRULY DESCRIBE THIS STORY AND EVEN THAT DOESN'T DO IT JUSTICE. DON'T EVER STOP WRITING. YOU HERE ME???
1000/1000Author's Response: Oh my Rowling, thank you so much! Seriously, this review just made my day. I kind of wiggled around in a happy dance sort of manner with a stupid grin on my face. I'm SO GLAD you like it! I'm trying to figure out what to do next, so the next Chapter should be up soon, and the later ones should be easier to bang out. You know. Writer's block. Such a thing. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! Report Review
Patiently awaiting chapter 6... If its considered patient to check for an update 3 times a day:)
Loving the story can't wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! I really appreciate the love. :) Currently, I'm suffering from a bit of writer's block, but the next chapter should be up for validation soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
love love looove this whole story so far! started the first chapter and couldnt stop! really well written and im so excited for the next chapter so new update soon pleeaaase!(: ps. love what youve done with freddys character!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm super glad you're loving it, it's a lot of fun to write. :) I'm working on Chapter 6 now, it should be up soon!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
So could you possibly write 20 more chapters right now?Author's Response: Haha, if only it were that easy! I'm working on Chapter 6 now, hopefully I'll have it up soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Report Review
Loving it, can't wait for the next chapter, don't rush yourself though!!!Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing! I should be up with Chapter 6 soon! Report Review
I like this story, but I'm not sure if I like Dorothy. She needs to grow up or she'll end up hurting Fred. He is just too good with her to be hurt. And I loved that big kiss (though she still needs to grow up to deserve Fred). I am glad that James is trying to make things right. Someone has to do it.
Anyway, great story. Keep updating, please! I'd love to know what will happen next.
InesAuthor's Response: I feel like Dorothy is one of those characters that you want to root for, but the things they do annoy the crap out of you. Hopefully, she'll become more loveable as the story progresses. I'm glad you enjoy the story, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I'm sorry, but Dorothy is seriously messed up and pathetic. It's seriously disturbing how she is refusing to see how problematic James treatment of her is and her willingness to just accept and encourage it. I'm glad that James is trying to stop their unhealthy, dysfunctional dynamic, although he is still being totally insensitive to her feelings; but in a way it's hard to even feel bad for Dorothy as she is practically begging him to keep using her and probably wouldn't mind if he cheated on Jen with her. In a way she is almost just as selfish as James, not caring about how her actions affect or hurt others, so I guess they kind of deserve each other as I don't particularly respect either one of them. And I think Freddie can do way better than her until she gets more emotionally healthy and stable and doesn't get joy out of being used by someone. I'm not sure where you are going with this but hope that Dorothy doesn't start taking advantage of Freddie's feelings like James did to her.Author's Response: "Love" makes people do crazy things sometimes, and that's where I believe Dorothy's mind set is. But you are right, she is very emotionally unstable currently and a bit pathetic when it comes to James. I hope that as the plot moves forward, she becomes more respectable. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you are enjoying the story just the same. :) Report Review
Great chapter hurry up with the next one please because i really want to know what happens nextAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Report Review
Can't wait for chapter 4Author's Response: I'm glad! It's in the queue now, hopefully oyu won't have to wait long! :) Report Review
Obviously I'm rooting for Freddie. James is a total jerk to not only her but also Jen as it seems like he is planning to still cheat on her with Dorothy and who knows who else whenever it strikes his fancy. I really hope Dorothy gets some self-respect and stands up to James for the way he is treating her. And I hope she recognizes how much better Freddie treats her and how much happier she will be with him. Thanks for sharing.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I'm hoping to do some real character development as the story continues, really show all the sides to everyone. :) Report Review
This Is A Good Story Keep On Writting I Wouldn't Mind If She End Up With James But I Hope She Ends Up With. FredAuthor's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
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