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Review #1, by Courtney Quidditch and kisses

24th July 2013:
Well, I thought Scorpius and Rose were still dating so neither Scorpius nor Maddie should have been playing at all, and it makes Scorpius look pretty bad if he is supposedly so into Rose but wants to organize opportunities to kiss others. And it's pretty messed up since Maddie and Scorpius are friends with Rose and Al. I think kissing like this is still cheating, but if they both realize this is wrong and decide to not do anything like it again even if they are attracted to each other, then I think things will be okay. But if they do anything again, I hope Al and Rose find out and they have to face the consequences of doing something they knew would hurt them.

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Review #2, by nn My date with Brandon.

21st July 2013:
interesting part of story

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Review #3, by RavenclawGirl11 Christmas part one

4th March 2013:
Okay, first of all, I love this story and I think I'm obsessed, however (I'm sorry to say this) you're spelling is REALLY bad, have you considered getting a beta to edit your spelling, etc
Sorry for the nastiness,
RavenClawGirl11

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I know I suck at spelling. I got a spell checker so hopefully the next chapters are spelled better.

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Review #4, by insomniac Al's confession

30th January 2013:
I liked this chapter quite a bit too, but I think that its lacking some detail towards the end.

Where Albus talks about his family is great, fantastic even, but the whole kissing part seemed a bit rushed if you know what I mean. Take your time and adds tons of detail to important scenes like this. That's the best way to write a great story :)

Off to read the next,

~Lily

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I agree, I should have slowed things down a bit. I will keep this in mind when I write the upcoming chapters. Thanks again!

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Review #5, by insomniac Hogwarts

30th January 2013:
Oooo. I like this story. It's seems fresh and funny.

I really like the way the next gen characters are portrayed in this, like Dom for example. A bit rude at first, but very easy to get along with in the end.I also love Scorp, Rose and Maddie. Also Al but i don't know too much about how he is in your story. I'm just a bit biased since he's my favourite next gen character :P

Also, I loved the ending. "Yeah, if you asked me then, no. No, I didn't have any idea that Albus Potter would change my life."

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the characters so far. I guess I trying to make Al seem a little mysterious in this chapter. Thanks again :)

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