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Review #1, by Eaglehawk ABOARD THE HOGWARTS EPRESS

8th January 2013:
For starters the cat's name was Crookshanks. It is spelled "Quidditch". You have a lot of spelling and English mistakes too but nothing that can't be fixed

Might I suggest this you try to look for infomation about the story on the Harry Potter Wikipedia page

I find it very useful myself.

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