I really liked this one-shot, I think its just 'her' spunky attitude and the fact she has innocence but still seems pretty badass!
I also love how you've made Hugo into a hotty, not many people do!
As for names I've got a few suggestions, they're not very good but anythings better than nothing right?
It could be Annalise Flint(daughter of Marcus Flint)
Lana Nott(of course we all know the nott family)
Amelia Thomas (I kind of like the idea of her being the daughter of someone who was in Gryffindor...makes it more exciting)
But they're just a few suggestions! Good luck!~Q.O.NAuthor's Response: I'm super duper happy that you like it! :D I always thought Hugo would be hawt, he has Hermione and Ron as parents okay? Not to mention he's a Weasley, what did you expect? :P The name suggestions are really awesome, BUT I kinda already started the story, it's called Extraordinary, and I only put up the first chapter, and some of the content might be confusing, and I'm mainly focused on Daughter of Earth, my other story anyway so.. yeah. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and maybe you could check out my other stories? Tell me what you think! xx Report Review
this is an interesting and funny story! she was stuck under a mistletoe for hours waiting for a guy to kiss her! I'm going to read the sequel now!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: I'm super glad you liked it! How'd you like the sequel? Maybe you could check out my other story, 'Daughter of Earth' and see how you like that one? I'm really happy, you liked it! :D xx Report Review
No no no no no no no HOW is this an one-shot? You are just toying with peoples emotions :(
Jokes, I really like it, a bit quick but yeah, I don't even know her name
Not going to say much, going to save it for the next story of this
9/10Author's Response: Mwahahahaha, toying with people's emotions is what I do best ;)
I guess it's quick 'cause it's a just a 'trailer' of sorts, a sneek-peak if you like, not too much given away ;)
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Haha this was cute! I have an obsession with Christmas, and I love Hugo/OC stories. You don't see enough of them. I love the idea of wizard mistletoe too, I think it's hysterical. Good job!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you found it cute. Obsess away my friend, I have a friend just like that, she gets crazy excited when Christmas comes round :) YAY YOU FOUND IT FUNNY!!! The fact that Hugo/OC stories are barely around is partly the reason why I put it up :D
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i have the exact same problem with romantic scenes! ps. your store must be written soon because this was AWESOME!Author's Response: So I've started it, and the first chapter should be up in a few days :D its sort of a filler chapter to be honest, but it just helps you get the characters more. read it and see ;) I'm so glad I'm not the only one with the same problem! This review really made me happy :D Report Review
hey this was really cute. I think you should do some bigger story or something. And as for names what about Leah, Morgan or Charlie!Author's Response: Well I've put up the first chapter of the new story. I'm sorry I didn't use any of your suggestions, her name sort of just appeared in my head and I just had to use it :) xx Report Review
I love this one-shot! It's really cute. I've not read many Hugo fics and I've been looking for one for ages.
DO NOT, UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES, CALL HER EMILY!! I have a friend called Emily and I always try to avoid naming my story characters that, because if I do I'll never live it down. She's such a chatterbox and a really big boaster so all I'll get is "HA, IN YOUR FACE I'M IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH HUGO WEASLEY IN YOUR BLOODY FACE SUMMER!!" And I'll probably get an earache.
However, I do like the following names: Emma, Aria/Ariel, Lauren, Dani, Amy, Lisa, Catherine, Christina, Demi and Sam.
Loved it !!Author's Response: Yes ma'am ;) I would hate for such an amazing reviewee (I don't think that's a word, but meh) to be inconvenienced in such a way ;) I think I'll go with Lauren, I'm so glad you loved it!! :D Report Review
wow tht was great! I think the names Lauren, Hayley, Ariana, and Emily would be great!Author's Response: Thanks :) I think I'm gonna name her Lauren Emily. I guess people are gonna call her Em, omg this is perfect thanks! :D x Report Review
Hi! I've just read your story and I love it! I really hope that the "actual story" comes out soon! Congratulations!
I like Emily, as musicloverrr5 sugested.
Keep up with your good work and thank you for posting!Author's Response: Heya! Thanks so much! :D And I think Emily is great but I'm still indecisive, I can't see her as and Emily, maybe Emily could be a middle name though. :) Thanks again for the review and I'm working on the story! :) Report Review
loved this! can't wait to read the actual story :) i like names like emma, emily, aria? those are just ideas though :) Keep up the good writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like it :D And thank you for the names as well, I really appreciate it, and I'll take them into consideration, no promises though ;) Report Review
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