Wow... That was a short chapter; but a well written one. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Well... I have three guesses as to who the mystery girl is... Annnyhow interested in this and so glad I can catch up! Report Review
Well now I see how this girl plays into all of this- maybe! Continue with the good stuff! Report Review
Oh wow! This really tied in well! I only found one spot that you might wish to fix; hari should be hair. Oh and as for the whole metric system thing JKR used our system of measuring with "inches of parchment" so don't fretAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing and thank you for informing me, I'll be sure to fix that :) Report Review
Well Another scene well done Miss. I just cant wait to see how it all ties together...Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I believe it will all tie together nicely :) Report Review
Wow! another great chapter I must say!Author's Response: Thank you :) the next will be up soon Report Review
Wow! Good first ch! I demand more! I would be interested in doing a banner for you. Just not this week till next Tuesday (Midterms to study and do... 'Joy.') But if you wish for me to feel free to email adele.25.smith(at)gmail(dot)com along with any sort of specifications you have!
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Hey! This is fabulous so far! I LOVE IT. I'm adding it to my 'Reading List' on my iPod :D I hope to see an update soon!
Also, you spelt 'Gryffindor' as 'Gryffindore' a couple of times
- you said to point out spelling mistakes >.<
But it's AMAZING. You have talent, my friend. *nods wisely*Author's Response: Really? I thought I fixed those, I noticed that to, for some reason I always do that. And thank you :) Report Review
please please please update soon i love this storyAuthor's Response: I will as soon as I can, depending on how long it will take to validate, and thank you :) it's my first, but I've literally been writing this in my head for over a year, and trust me, it gets better! Report Review
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