love the story so far! i can't wait to read more :)
~M

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AHAHHA omg i get it! ITS APRIL FOOLS GUYS! that's why the words are all switched, nice one hpff :) anyways, great chapter (rlly hope lottie and jack get together sometime btw...)

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Is it bad that I ship Lottie and Jack? I probably shouldn't but whatever, I still like them together. Jack sounds so much like Oliver it's almost scary, he's just a lot ruder than Oliver was.

What I found really hilarious were the replaced words in the chapter and how dirty and completely wrong they made some of the sentences sound (what's up with that anyway?)

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What the heck was up with all these words getting switched with eyebrow and goat. Did autocorrect really go crazy or something. Holy. And I swear to God, every time it said garden shed I was thinking something totally inappropriate and dirty.

Where it said puppies, did it mean to say eyes?

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erm... i may be missing something but, you replaced the word wand with banana, mouth with big toe, face with purse, fuck with goat, and ass with eyebrow... why? and other than that amazing usual haha
xox miluv

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hey nice chapter, what's with the goats and eyebrows though?

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This story is hilarious! I've got a new favourite story that I'll be stalking —I mean, reading. I absolutely love Lexie and I'm so excited to see what happens next.

Expect another review from me on Monday, I'll be busy tomorrow.

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I just love Georgies comebacks but unfortunately I can't putting favourite one because I have to keep this 12+ and all.

I sense that the drama is about to start what with Sergie coming to Hogwarts and everything. That was a good plot twist by the way.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!

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Lot tie took a low blow with Jack, that was mean what she said to him about Witch Weekly and taking his shirt off. At the same time I kind of feel bad for her because of how everyone is treating but at the same time she kind of asked for it.

If that's how the people she knows react then imagine what the Quidditch scouts reaction is going to be.

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Hello :)

I loved the start to this story. Your description of Quidditch was great! You also gave a really good explanation of the lead up to where we are in only a few lines with the battle for the quidditch captaincy with the addition of some characters we already know so that was really great.

Wow - that article sounds like it's been Rita Skeeter-d. I actually felt quite sorry for Lottie as she did seem to have good intentions at the time but nobody else is seeing it like that.

I thought Lottie was a really fun character in this, even if she was a little angry at times. You have her a really good back story with the Quidditch - I love that Oliver's sons are in it! There's obviously more to find out with regards to her mum though.

This was a really good first chapter, well done!

Lauren :)

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So, yeah, I'm the person that made your first two CI's and ever since I read up on this to get a feel of the story, I've been totally hooked. I saved it in my favorites and everyday I check to see if there is a new chapter... IT'S JUST GENIUS. I love your writing and this story is incredible. I can't WAIT for the next chapter! ^__^

Author's Response: SNEAKY! Two different names? And thank you for the chapter images, they're both B-E-A-UTIFUL. Your praise is making me blush, so I'm going to stop typing now.
:)

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LOL! I love how her first encounter with Ivanovitch was such a fail :))
OH Lily! Can't wait to see how this plays out! Great chapter

Author's Response: She's a lady of charm... Lottie can make better impressions, though. Never fear, you don't have to abandon ship just yet :)

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love it! so excited to see their first meeting with Ivanovitch xxx

Author's Response: Thank you! I bet Ivanovitch isn't feeling quite the same way...
:)

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"Probably not, though I can imagine she'd be slightly better at it than Georgie... :)" IS THAT A HINT? :O

Oh no, is he going to be a psycho killer? Gee I hope not... I don't quite fancy mentally deranged bad boys. :> hehehe Ivanovitch and Georgi... Hm We will have to see

Author's Response: Hmm... *Pins 'Georgivitch' to the metaphorical ideas cork-board*. And I'll try to reign in his psychosis (can't make any promises though).
:)

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I seriously did not expect Ivanovich to show up at their school! Now things get really interesting... I want to know how all of them look :> Include chapter images please?
Great job! Keep going!

Author's Response: Oh, but there are! Well, for chapters one and two. I expect that I'll get around to asking for more once I've got chapter four validated, but in the meantime, just imagine a shirtless Colton Haynes from Teen Wolf as Ivanovitch :)

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Update already! (YES. I am aware that you just did. But the next chapter is not up yet and I'm getting impatient.)

Author's Response: Crikey, I wouldn't like to be in front of you in a queue - you'd be like a Rottweiler. And about that update... I'll see what I can do *starts furiously tapping away at a word document*
:)

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KILL ME. That was incredible!

Author's Response: Do I have to? That would be harsh, and I'm not too fond of killing off my reviewers. Thanks (I think) for the sort-of praise, though :)

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AH I SHIP IT! I SHIP HER AND IVANOVITCH! I WILL TAKE THAT SHIP TO MY GRAVE! AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW THE GUY YET! PLEASE MAKE HIM AN AWESOME CHARACTER! PLLEEAASE

THAT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD. I HAVE TO TYPE IN ALL CAPS

UPDATE SOON! GOOD JOB! GOD BLESS! YOU ARE THE QUEEN! A BEAST. THE BEST. THE WORST. JUST UPDATE. :>

Author's Response: OKAY! What if Ivanovitch has some serious issues, huh? Would Lottie really be cut out for helping him through psychological problems? Probably not, though I can imagine she'd be slightly better at it than Georgie...
:)

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YAY good work keep it up

Author's Response: I'll try, although now my exams are finished, writing this won't be my revision-avoidance technique. Let's keep our fingers cross :)

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ADSKJgwpo. i loved it.

it's original and new and shiny! With wittiness and it's very well written. Lottie's characterisation is fabby as is her actual character. It makes a change from quite a few OC's around. I adore Georgie, she's hilarious, and the team! This story is the first to get me excited in about a millenia, so yeah i can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make the two of them imperfect, and they just sort of came out insane instead. Oh well...
:)

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It's brilliant! I'm wondering why you've only got a couple of reviews but no matter as long as you keep going the direction you're headed and writing the way you are, this'll become very popular. Update soon :)

Author's Response: An Alfie! Well if it does get popular, I might go mad with power and command my readers to rebel - that would inevitable end badly, so let's just hope this stays as our little secret, eh?
:)

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This is really good actually. Well written, amusing and intelligent. I'm surprised you've not got more supporters! I love it - I'm looking forward to the next chapter. x

Author's Response: Aw, my face is all smiley now. It appeases me that this appeases you, and I genuinely hope that my insanity doesn't ruin this story.
Thank you :)

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I loved, loved, loved it! It's new, it's fresh, it's sexy exciting.
But waiittt! Where are my darling Potters?
I'm really interested in how all this will play out, it's genius! Update soon!

Author's Response: MORE LOVE FOR YOU! And yes, there is a deficit of canon characters - there'll be a Potter along soon though, don't you worry.
:)

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LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Author's Response: AND I LOVE YOU! Seriously, if you consent to marrying me, we could spend a marvellous life together. I'll let you think it over.
Thank you :)

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Oh, this is so cute! I loved it, and I could not stop laughing! Lottie is such a fun character, and the team already makes me want to know more about them. I really cannot wait to read more, it's fabulous so far. :)

Author's Response: It's... THE MOTHER OF MY BANNER! Thank you so much for the review, I hope you enjoy seeing your work adorning the summary from now on :D

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