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Review #1, by HEG Thoughts On A House

15th March 2014:
Review 6/10 Gryffindor vs Slytherin blackouts

Aww the beginning bit is cute where she is saying what she is not but telling us that she is brave. I really like that little Paragraph thing, it really makes you think of the different qualities of each house. What I always think about with the sorting hat is what if you have ALL the qualities of ALL the houses. Then what happens? I don't know. I really like the way that none of her family supply her, her once closest friend wanted her to be in Slytherin and not Gryffindor but still she kept going and became the Head Girl and Prefect. You've put that really well. I really like it. I love the idea of doing part of the story from the sorting hat's point of view. It really is unique and interesting. That's curious that the sorting hat doesn't know where to put her. I would have thought it would be Gryffindor for sure, though thinking about it she could suit all of them. If I was the sorting hat, I would have given the choice to Lily. Also there is a slight problem with the spacing in between paragraphs which disrupts the flow of the story. Don't worry! It can easily be edited.

Thank you for posting this story. It really has been a pleasure to read,

HEG :)

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