This is a really cute story! I like the way that it flows between the past and the present, and Albus's annoyed reactions every time he's corrected or interrupted. However, there are a few punctuation errors (though, it could just be your style, so I apologize if that's the case), but overall, I really like this story. (:Author's Response: Thank you for the review :D I appreciate it and I'm glad you like the story ^^ I don't know about punctuation though, maybe sometimes because I'm too absorbed in telling the story that I get it messed up. Otherwise, it's just how I do it :p Thanks for making the remark anyway, I'll keep it in mind the next time I write something :D Thank you again ^^ Report Review
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