ooo i really like this ship! And this story is super cute! however, if I were you, I might show more instances of how they truly loved one another, rather than merely telling us briefly about them. It's a great concept, but maybe flush it out a bit to make it more believable?
Either way, i like this story a lot!
~M

Author's Response: I felt like they were characters that don't get much time in the spotlight, so that's why I wrote about them. This was kind of a spur of the moment piece so eventually I'm going to come back later and edit it so it's longer. :) Thanks! xx
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Hello!

I thought this was an interesting take on two characters which aren't really put in a great light in the series. I thought the story was really sweet but it would have been great to get a little more details about them, particularly in the later parts. You focused on the two of them getting together then sort of mentioned in passing that they got married had kids etc. They were such lovely small details that as a reader I was left wanting more! If you ever edit this I'd love to get more details.

This was a really good one-shot though - I did enjoy it.

Lauren :)

Author's Response: I wrote this in one sitting so I would agree that I kind of skipped over their marriage thing and I will definitely be going back to it later and editing it to add more details! I also agree with the fact that they aren't really put in the limelight very often and I just felt like they were a possibility as a couple (as I am a hardcore Dramione shipper) so I barely hinted at that ;) Thanks for the lovely review!! :) xx
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this was very very sweet and I liked it alot! Yes, do write more one-shots please 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! I want to finish one of my short stories before I write any more one-shots. And I need ships to write about first! I'm eventually going to go back and edit this later. Thanks for the review! :) xx
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ofocurse i prefer dramione ( i think u do too) but i gotta say that ur writing is so lovely...nd this story was kinda cute nd i liked it :) .
dramione rockz,
shinichi

ps- i miised dramione alott.hehe ,u'll soon see my reveiw in ur other story of hermione/cormac :) cya

Author's Response: Thanks! This is kind of a tie-in to the future of LMM, which is why I tagged it with a Dramione pairing. Thanks for the review! :) xx
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I actually like the story, but it was a bit brief and there really wasn't much about Hermione and Draco. All in all it's a decent story. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: The reason I put it with a Dramione tag is because it hints at my other story, Love Makes Me and what will eventually happen there. I think it was a bit brief as well, but this is my first one-shot so I was just trying it out to see how much I like them. Thanks for your kind review! :) xx
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Aw this is just to cute!!!

Blaise/ Pansy isn't my most favourite ship (DRAMIONE FOREVAH AND EVAH) but I ship them with my ginormous shipper heart.

Um.I'll review again when I'm more coherent.

-DracosCookie

Author's Response: Dramione is my OTP as well! (That's my main story) I just felt like they were two characters that didn't really get much of the lime light so I thought, Hey, I'm going to write them a little one-shot. Thanks for the review! :) xx
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