Hilarious, truly hilarious! :)
As a huge Oliver/OC fan, I simply have to rate this 10/10!
It's an awesome one-shot, well done!!! Report Review
That was awesome.
I think you just described every single fangirl on this planet and the dreams that they have. And I think you described them reallly accurately.
I never realised until now exactly how creepy a fangirl and their infatuation is. Anyway, great job on the chapter, I really liked it personally and I love Oliver at the very end. It was so cute! Report Review
omfg i think a part of me just died
this is like the best thing ever.
you're right, it IS what every tumblr fan-girl wants. this is like the bridget jones of the tumblr teenage girl fanatic world. i'm exactly your target audience, i'm proud to admit, and this is EXACTLY what should be happening with me and tom daley!!
but i'm still so happy for prosper.
and i'm even happier that she didn't wake up, and the ending line was, it was all a dream. if you did that, i would cry. like i honestly would. prosper symbolizes pretty much every girl with some male obsession, and this was like a step forwards for girlhood.
i'm not going to comment on grammar and stuff because i didn't see anything worth commenting about. this was such a pleasant read.
by the way, i'm BeaJerry from the review battle.
go team blue!
bea x Report Review
Hey this patronus_charm from the review tag :)
Ah I thought this story was really cute! I loved how Prosper was portrayed as that fangirl we are all secretly and how some fangirls do go to crazy limits! I also liked that Oliver liked her back as it was just adorable. I think every girl can relate to it as we always wish someone who we never thought we could get actually likes you back!
patronus_charm xxxAuthor's Response: Awe, thank you! I just wanted Prosp to be easy to relate to, but then a bit more over the top XD Glad you liked it! xx Report Review
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Okay so that was undeniably the cutest thing I've read in a long time and I'm not just saying that because I adore Oliver... but seriously, Prosper is the cutest OC and your characterisation of her is amazingly well done in a short amount of words. It was fluffy and humorous and I adored it! So well done to you ;) I'm so happy I read this!! Thank you for an awesome one shot! Sooo favouriting this! :PAuthor's Response: aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you found it cute and not annoying XD Much appreciated love, thanks for taking the time to review! xx Report Review
I LOVE OLIVER/OC. I LOVE TUMBLR FANGIRLING. I LOVE THIS.
You used flail and squee in a story. Sold. Man, I wish this wasn't so short! Your ending was really cute, and I love that she fainted again, but I wanted to keep reading. XD Really cute, I'm so glad I found this.Author's Response: Maybe I'll make it a two shot if enough people ask nicely XDD
I'm really glad you liked it! Tumblr fangirling is THE BEST and I've always wanted to write a story about it, so there you go :D Thanks for the review love! xx Report Review
So after I saw your blog post (I'm apondinabluebox on the forums by the way, not some secret stalker haha) I decided to take a look at your stories!
I quite like this little one-shot; you were right about it being something that every fangirl is able to relate to. I've been like that myself (although not the fainting) and it was fun to read such a lovely piece of fluff that managed to cheer me up after a bleak day. Well done, Molly! :D
I loved the moment when Prosper walked into the Quidditch changing rooms! I would have been way too scared to do that haha, so kudos to her! The moment when she realized Oliver had seen her shoes was just so funny; I cringed for her! And then that twist when she worked out how he could possibly have recognized her just by her shoes... awww. ♥
If I had to nitpick, I did pick up on a few typos. A couple of times you spell Prosper's name Proper or Propser. Additionally, in the final paragraph, instead of creating a space after "he", you created a new line. Also, in the last line, "payed" is actually spelt "paid". These are all human errors and nothing that proofreading a couple more times wouldn't fix. :)
Overall, I really liked this one-shot! You've created something that every girl (and even a few guys!) can really relate to, which is excellent! I have to admit loving this line: "she was certain that her face represented something of a disoriented owl" because imagine how that looks! :')
*runs off to favourite*
-Katie ♥Author's Response: ah, typos XD thanks for pointing that out.
And thank you for the lovely review! I'm really glad you like it - humour and fluff writing isn't really my thing, so the fact that it wasn't too terrible is something that's made me feel quite a bit better about it XD
Prosper = the fangirl in all of us :D thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it â¥ Report Review
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