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Review #1, by Superwholock Fangirl Prospects

20th October 2013:
I must say, I had almost given up any hope I had for HPFF. Story after story seems to be written by children who can barely string English words together. It's thoroughly refreshing to read something that has purpose in writing, and at least a once over in proofreading! Your style is entertaining and appropriate. Your characters are true to Rowling, but with excellent artistic liberty. Tom Riddle having a soft spot for a Muggle girl! The originality of it is wonderful. The lack of excessive fluff in the relationship is (excuse me for repeating this phrase so often) amazingly refreshing. Overall, wonderful work. I only stumbled upon it by clicking random story, but I'm so glad I did. I can't believe this story is so under appreciated! Only a few reviews for each chapter! Meanwhile, sordid Dramione fluff gets hundreds of views. Ah, the injustice! Melodrama aside, top-notch in every aspect. Completely renewed my faith in HPFF. Remarkably enjoyable. All I'm wondering is what your take is on Riddle's evolution as a character. What triggered a queer young boy to take the next step towards Dark Lord? Keep it going! Don't leave me hanging here! You have at least one devoted fan on the back-burner! :)

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Review #2, by RosieQueen Arrival

13th April 2013:
I liked this chapter a lot too. Seeing this event from Tom's PoV.

All banners require credits, by the way. I'm sorry to be a bother, but I know this for a fact because I'm an artist on TDA as well. It doesn't matter if the artist doesn't tell you to, because you are expected to anyway. It's a rule.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #3, by RosieQueen Extricated

13th April 2013:
This is very interesting. :) I don't think anybody is born without love, even Voldemort himself. Your punctuation and grammar needs a little work, but other than that the story's idea is very good. Tom's characterization as a kid was very realistic, with him sounding so annoyed by the other children in the orphanage, his lucid dreams, and willingness to control people...very excellent. Keep up the great work!

P.S: You should really credit the person who made your banner. They made it for you and it's rude not to even credit them.

~Rosie

Author's Response: Thank you Rosie! I've been wanted to write a "Tom" story for a long time, so I am excited to see where this one takes me. I'm doing my best to proof read but a few errors always seem to escape me.

Regarding the banner, the maker didn't require a credit. Thanks for the concern though!


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Review #4, by Aphrodite Dreams

12th April 2013:
I can't wait to reas more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I will have more posted very soon!:)

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Review #5, by storyneverdies Extricated

9th December 2012:
This is the first chapter In my new story! I really like how it turned out and I'm excited to see where it takes me! I'd love to read your reviews and see how you all like it!

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