Hello!! I kind if love this story. Candi seems very likeable. :) Please update!! Report Review
Your story is really good!
Please update soon.
It has quite a different plot to the typical story and that makes it way more interesting. I can't wait to read how it turns out in the end. I WANT TO READ MORE!
I was just a bit confused though because you said they just came to England when they needed to. Does that mean they don't live in England? I think it would be good if you could please explain that and give more of a background story on why her family decided to leave Australia and go to England - is it because of Hogwarts?
Emma (I'm an Aussie too)Author's Response: aww thank you! ahahaha. her family still lives in australia but she goes to england because the education is better there, same with the hospitals. sorry about that (: i'll make it clearer in the next chapter. thank you for your review! (: xo Report Review
Hello! I like your story so far :) Her cancer was definitely a new perspective, and it will be interesting to see how you develop the plot. I really liked how you said that Lucy was just a friend. It has always kind of bugged me about these types of stories where they come back and see the friend they have not seen in YEARS and are automatically best friends again. I think Candi will be an interesting character to follow. In this chapter she had both the traits of disliking attention (not sure if that's what it really is, but couldn't think of any other way to describe it) and desire to stand up for one's self and whatnot. Anyway, good story so far :)Author's Response: hi! yeah i found it a bit annoying too so I thought it would be nice to have something a bit different. yeah she hates the attention. thank you! your review was really helpful (: xo Report Review
I luv your story! please update it soonAuthor's Response: aww thank you! that means so much. I'm writing the next chapter now so i'll update soon (: xo Report Review
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