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Author's Response: Wow I'm incredibly flattered :3 I'll update soon...the chapter is still getting written but thank you so much for this review. It has really made me very happy :) Keep reviewing!

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really wishing i could throw something at scorpius right now for that curveball! i'm curious as to who his new gf is though. overall, i like this chapter, and i'm glad things are working out for al and bee :)
~M

Author's Response: Hehe :3 I feel the same ;) Please keep reading and reviewing :D

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I'm glad that Albus and Bee are doing well, though he needs to tell her the truth before it all comes out, which it always does! I wonder exactly what Scorpius said to Rose because from what she said it seems like he was pretty harsh and doesn't really care about her feelings very much. It's not really fair to say he moved on since she didn't seem interested because it doesn't sound like he has ever made a move and she was just as flirty as he has been. And since he kept his girlfriend a secret from anyone it seems like he knows he should feel guilty and didn't want people to know for some reason. And it's not really fair to get annoyed at Rose for making a move now as she obviously didn't know he was dating someone else. If he decides to stay with this mystery girl, then I hope Rose moves on as well and finds someone who will be more considerate of her feelings. And I hope they can at least talk thing out so they can stay friends. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely long review :) It has made me very happy ^_^ Please keep reading and reviewing!

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Loved the date :) And the lovely conversation about burgers :D It made absolutely no sense but I'm guessing thats what you were going for :) So now that they kissed, does this mean they're together? Oh I just loved this chapter! Write more!

Author's Response: Thanks I just finished writing a chapter so I'm going to put it up for validation. Keep reviewing!

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Yayayayayayayayayay! They're on a date! They're on a date! They kissed! yay I'm so happy this isn't even normal :D Loved the chappie :) Update soon!

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omg LOVE! i love the banter between albus and bee- it's super cute and the whole burger thing was very ravenclaw-esque of her (imho). this was seriously super cute and i'm so glad you updated!
also, the chapter dedication made my day :)
~M
ps- those longer chapters that i mentioned are now up :)

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I still love it, but sometimes it feels like it's moving too fast. But I'm guessing there's going to be a big fall from grace or something, some secrets getting out. Who was it who broke her heart last time? Update soon!

Author's Response: Okay, I'll try to take it a little slow and all...thanks for letting me know :) And obviously, secrets are bound to come out so please keep reading and reviewing!

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I am so in love with this story :) It is PERFECT in EVERY WAY possible. I'm so happy Bree and Al went on a date!!! And then they kissed and died inside and asdfghjkl;. I can't wait until the next chapter! XD

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!!! :) I'll update ASAP :) Please keep reviewing!

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is it wrong to tell you i love you? cause i'm IN LOVE with this story and that leads to you

Author's Response: Aww thank you :) I love you too you know :D Cause I love this review and that leads to you ;) Keep reviewing love!

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I think my favourite quote from this chapter so far was McGonagall commenting on the mantis having intercourse (I was going to say coetus but I'm not sure that I spelled the word right).

Anyway, that part had me laughing out loud.

Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you like my sense of humor :)

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You've got a couple of grammar errors that I would suggest fixing (like "you're" and "your" for instance). Also, I would suggest adding in more description because the majority of this chapter is basically dialogue. There's no description to set the scene or give me even a hint of what anything looks like.

Anyway, I'm interested to see where this goes and how you'll make this type of story line your own. Besides my criticism I'm genuinely enjoying the story so far.

Author's Response: Yeah I tend to make those kinds of grammatical errors :/ Okay I'll try adding more descriptions in the coming chapters...thanks for pointing it out :) I'm really looking for a beta who can help me out with the flaws in the story. Anyway thanks for reviewing! This really helped so please review again! :D

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Okay. This story is amazing. Please, update soon! I absolutely love this story. It's magnificent.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

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Great chapter! I love how Bree made things awkward between Scorpius and Rose :) Maybe this will get them together :D I can't wait for Al and Bee to get together! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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OH MY GOSH WRITE MORE I LOVE YOUR STORY ITS AWESOME I WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER AND I'M JUST RAMBLING ON AND ON NOW I HOPE THIS REVIEW ISN'T ANNOYING OK CAPITAL LETTERS ARE FUN PLEASE WRITE MORE REALLY FAST COS I LOVE THIS STORY OK BYE FOR NOW

Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much :D I love capital letters! They convey so much emotion :D Please keep reviewing!

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you're = you are
your = belonging to you

Author's Response: I make these mistakes every now and then...I'd love a beta who could point them out but thanks :) I'll look out for more of these grammatical errors in the coming chaps :)

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Oo! New chapter! I love it :) I'm so happy this isn't about the bet anymore and I love where the story is going! :D Update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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yay another chapter! i'm so glad rose called off the bet! and i love reading from albus' POV. I actually just updated a chapter in his pov if you want to check out my fic No Second Chances.
I can't wait to read your next chapter!
~M

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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You are WONDERFUL! It's not every day someone with your talent comes along. I hope to see more chapters soon. Albums seems like quite the ladies' man.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

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You are WONDERFUL! It's not every day someone with your talent comes along. I hope to see more chapters soon. Albums seems like quite the ladies' man.

Author's Response: You reviewed already but thanks again :)

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Good work! Hope to see more soon

Author's Response: Thank you! Keep reviewing! :D

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I love this story!! Please make more chapters ASAP!!

Author's Response: Thank you! As soon as I finish a chap I'll put it up! :D Keep reviewing!

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OMG I GOT CHAPTER DEDICATION! Wow I am so touched. Sorry my account is acting weird so I have to review this 'anonymously' but I love the chapter and I love it a tad bit more because it's dedicated to ME! :D Update fast, okay? I love this story!

Author's Response: Haha you got chapter dedication :) Thanks so much for reviewing...this is why I dedicate a chap to you :D I'll update as soon as I finish a new chap :) Keep reading and reviewing :D

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I am loving this story! And this chapter! Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Keep reading and reviewing! :D

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this is such an amazing story! so upset that this was the last updated chapter! please update soon :)

Author's Response: I will update as soon as a I finish the next chapter! :) Keep reading and reviewing! :D

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I would like to start by saying I love where the plot line of this is going, but I cant help but resent Albus for even trying to make a girl fall for him just to win a bet. Maybe once he realizes that he really likes her, he can plan to purposefully lose the bet and tell Bree about it, or he could have a heated discussion with someone who is looking out for Bree, because so far, none of them seem to really care that she is essentially being played. I think that that would make people like albus more, and to make people think more highly of the rest of the characters maybe make it a group discussion, i.e. one with Rose, Scorpius, and Dom, which are all people he cares about and trusts. So far though, this is fabulously written, and I cannot wait until you update again! Please make it soon!
Best of luck with the writing-
Rachel

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I do recall Dom yelling a bit at Albus in the second chapter but thank you for pointing this out. I'll be sure to include her friends' concern in the future chapters. Keep reading and reviewing! :D

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