Reading Reviews for Through the Rubble
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by HeyMrsPotter Fifth Floor, Left Wing

7th July 2014:
This was such an adorable one-shot!

I love Luna, and I think she is really difficult to write but you got her absolutely perfect. I loved the line about that part of her castle being her favourite because she'd befriended the portraits, that's such a Luna thing to do! And the way she reacts to Neville, staring at his hand on her shoulder and then saying 'that's nice' in response to his kiss. All total Luna reactions to things!

I also really loved the descriptions you used, particularly those describing how the castle looked after battle and the little details like Neville having dried blood on his hands. Really brilliant fluff story!

Dee -House Cup 2014 review, Educational Decree number 2.

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Review #2, by Yurippe Fifth Floor, Left Wing

9th February 2013:
Aw!
Luna was spot on, and Neville was really sweet. Great job!

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Review #3, by Kendall Lovegood Fifth Floor, Left Wing

12th December 2012:
Love, love, love, love, lovvve it! That was the sweetest story I've ever read! I think you captured Luna and Nevilles characters so well! I love the last line too! "That's nice." Oh my rowling! It's so great!

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