this is getting more interesting! the last part of this chapter was great where James and Luce almost kissed! and Jack's dream was quite funny, although I'm sensing that either he likes Roxy or he's starting to... can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

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great first chapter! the password for the Gryffindor portrait made me laugh! lol it was also funny seeing Luce getting a little scared when she woke up at the Weasley-Potter household and James was on top of her. going to read next chapter now!^_^

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This was nice, keep going :)

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I like :D
love her relationship with James, its so cuuute.
cant wait till it progresses though...

keep writing, its heaps good for your first fanfic.

till next time
lOony

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Next chapter? It's really good so far not much to say until you get a little further along in the story. It's nice to have a story with Roxy as a prominent character. She seems to be forgotten in a lot of the other stories. Jack is cool or at least he seems cool from the first chapter. Is Scorpius supposed to be anything like his dad in this story?

Author's Response: It's definitely in progress! I'm writing the third one right this second as well. Jack is supposed to be the element of humor in the story, which sets him apart from Neville in his Hogwarts years and I really like that. As for Scorpius, he'll be coming up in the next few chapters so I'll let you read on to find out. But I'll give you a small clue: he's in Slytherin! :)

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