This story is amazing! Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so so so much! I am currently writing the next chapter. I apologize for it taking so long, I'm just very busy. But I am working on it, and it will be updated as soon as I finish. Report Review
Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it comes soon!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it. It's taking a lot longer than I hoped it would, and it doesn't help that I have so much other stuff to do... I will do my best to get it out soon. Report Review
good. i bet you can do better. this was not my favorite chapter, but it was still good.Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, this wasn't my favorite either... Hopefully the next one works out better! Report Review
Nyah... They kissed! I'm happy now.
There is just one thing I would like to know, and that is why is Josie still fixated with Scorpius after he said all those horrible things to her? It doesn't make sense to me.
But other than that, great story, I can really relate to some aspects of the story, and your (Josie's) narration is very pleasant to read.
Please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm doing my best to update, but it's just been a busy week. And Josie is the type of girl who, once her heart is set on something, she is not easily deterred. Him saying that just makes her want to prove him wrong and make him like her. Report Review
I have been reading this story and it feels like I keep rereading it. I really like it and I think it's really good and on the right track but I would love you forever if you updated quicker xxxtrueheroxxx (L) ! PLEASE! Ok well I hope you update soon! I love Josie!
Amy Potter (Or Amy Pond)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working on the next chapter but I am super busy right now. Hopefully once this week is done I will have time to finish writing it. Although, it might be a few more days after that, depending on when it's validated... Anyway, I promise I am working on it. Report Review
I liked this chapter, but why are there a bunch of random words in place of other words?Author's Response: Thanks! And I honestly don't know. Maybe its the site's April Fool's joke? I tried to edit it, but that version was correct. Report Review
This chapter was amazing. I felt so bad for Josie because of what Scorpius said, but Al is so sweet. And I want to know what's going to happen with Lily! I can't wait for the next update!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Seeing your reviews always make me so happy :). I'm still working on the next chapter, but hopefully it will be ready soon. Report Review
Hey, I really like how you are adding a relationship between siblings instead of a boyfriend or girlfriend. I have been admiring your writing style and appreciate how you don't have many errors in grammar or spelling. I think this story is on a great track and I can't wait to see what happens next.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you like the story! The next chapter is coming soon, I'm just having a bit of writers block... Report Review
I loved this chapter! I think your writing is fantastic and I love the plot. Especially now that we know Albus likes Josie.Author's Response: Thank you so much! And soon the plot will become a lot more interesting. Report Review
This sounds like a really interesting story and I can't wait to keep reading. Kudos!Author's Response: Thanks! It's my first fanfic, so I wasn't really sure about it Report Review
This is really good! Can't wait for more :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will be posting the next chapter soon. Report Review
I really like your writing!!! And I think Josie and Neville's relationship is perfect :)
I'm kinda hoping that Addi and Josie are really close sisters and like to team up on Colin, but I'm sure it'll be great either way!
Can't wait for the next chaper and the ready of the story :D
mrsronaldweasley262 Author's Response: Thanks! I was actually planning on them being close, or at least getting closer later on in the story, so now I will almost definitely do it. Report Review
It's a really good start. Cant wait to read more!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've already started working on the next chapter :) Report Review
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