It A Great Story And I Can't Wait For Chapter 7Author's Response: It will be up soon, it's waiting for validation now! Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for the review :) Report Review
i love your writing style! all sophisticated and shiz, anyway i really like this story so far, great first chapter :)Author's Response: Hahaha thanking you kindly! I must confess I'm pretty much winging it, but I can still hear my old English teacher in my ear so maybe that has something to do with it. Now get back to writing No Ordinary Nutter! ;) heeheehee Report Review
Haha, this should be interesting! Great chapter as always, and I loved reading about the Scamanders :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Always nice to know you're enjoying reading!! Report Review
Ha ha the ending :) You do not seem like this is your first fanfiction... I very much like your story so far, especially the character of Albus. He has a very different personality than in most other stories, and I liked how you made him change personalities between school and home. It will be interesting to see the interaction between them next chapter. He seems kind of clueless if he really thought that Hattie was that superficial, but I will reserve judgement :)
The biggest reason I like this story is because of your writing style. You are very good at describing things and I love all of your magical references. All of Roxy's pranks and the Catapult Caramels made me laugh too, and I quite liked the sock one :) They were all very creative and well fitting. I really like it so far, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I can assure you it feels like my first to me! But I'm happy to know it doesn't read like I'm struggling!
I'm glad that you find Albus interesting, that was the intended effect :) He is a bit clueless...we'll have to see if he redeems himself ;) I'm also pleased to know that you enjoy the little things like Roxy's pranks. Sometimes I worry that there's too many of them, and they're only little fillers - but I do like writing them.
The next chapter will come ASAP, but first I need to decide properly what will go down in the Potions classroom, I keep changing my mind! haha
Thanks again for reviewing, it's much appreciated :)
Awesome chapter! In my opinion, Hattie has every right to be angry at Albus, although before I fully form this opinion I guess I'll have to wait a couple more chapters!
I'm enjoying this story immensely; I think you accurately portray Hattie as a teenager and have given her faults which is amazing (there's nothing worse than a flawless character) and I'm eager for more!
Anyway, I know it gets extremely hectic around Christmas, so if you don't update before then, have a lovely Christmas and New Year!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you think that Hattie is quite a realistic character, I also dislike the perfect ones and that was part of what prompted me to write this. Yes I'm leading up to a big long Hattie/Albus scene in which hopefully all will be explained ;)
I have about half a chapter written so hopefully I'll be able to update! But yeah, crazy times. Merry Christmas and a happy new year to you too :) :) :)
Awesome story! Update soon!!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try my best but things are getting hectic with Christmas fast approaching! Asap :) Report Review
Great chapter again! I like the Scamanders, they seem interesting; can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: I like the Scamanders too, but more on them later ;) Next chapter focuses on Albus mainly though, so you'll have to wait and see! :)
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I loved this chapter! Both Hattie and Roxy have been introduced well, and I can't wait to watch their characters develop! Great job!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! You're the first one - feel special :) I'm glad you're liking it, I'm not really sure what I'm doing but I'll try to keep doing it! Hahaha
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