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Review #1, by potterfan310 Time to Decide

3rd February 2013:
Do you know how glad I am right now!!!
I am so,so,so,so,so,so happy she decided not to got through with the abortion and that she's keeping it.

I like how she's confided in Hermione and not Ginny. I mean slightly awkward telling Ginny before Al, don't you think.

I really can't wait for the next chapter, expecially if Harvey goes for a scan/to St Mungos. I really hope she tellls Al before then so he can come along.

I LOVE your characterisation of Harvey and Rose, but I feel we need to see more of Albus. I know he doesn't know yet but maybe some Harvey/Al interaction would be good :)

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

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Review #2, by potterfan310 Uncomfortable Moments

14th December 2012:
NO!

She can't :( I really hope that Rose manges to persuade her to tell Albus and then Harvey changes her mind.

Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

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Review #3, by Harry and Ginny Uncomfortable Moments

14th December 2012:
she's going to get rid of the baby? I bet that Rose won't let her or maybe Rose will say that Harv will tell Al or Rose will tell him instead. can't wait to read more!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Review #4, by potterfan310 And it began in the grass

27th November 2012:
I found this story because I lurking on the dark arts, first of all I LOVE ALBUS ♥ ♥ , second I LOVE ALBUS/OC ♥ and third I LOVE TEEN PREGNANCY stories!! ♥ ♥ (I'm weird)
SO OF COURSE I LOVE THIS! ♥ ♥

This is really good so far and I can't wait for her to tell Albus. I think the summary is catchy as well, it kinda reminded me of The Hunger Games when Katniss is saying 'I'm Katniss Everdeen and I'm 17 years old etc etc"

10/10
Deffinatly adding it to my fav's :D
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

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Review #5, by Harry and Ginny And it began in the grass

20th November 2012:
wow! this is a great start to a very interesting story! I can't wait to read the next chapter and to see Albus being told of this news! update soon please!!!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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