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Review #1, by Jen Chapter 1- Memories

22nd June 2013:
I'll be completely honest here, I hope I don't offend or upset you!
The story wasn't the most interesting in the world, but the overall idea is good.
It's not written very well either, the wording seems a little bit off and I'm guessing that English isn't your first language?
Keep writing, I think you're very promising!

Author's Response: Thank you for your time to read and review my story. I'll try my best to reduce my mistakes.

Due to medical reasons, I've been away from HPFF some months, and I may not continue the story for some time. I'll correct my english in the mean time.

- Blazing Golden Pheonix


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